• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2024
  • offline last seen Last Friday

EGO_


I am passionate about intricate and complex writing! I have been honored with numerous awards for my poetry in various competitions. Stay tuned <3

T

Luna is a anxious pony,
coming to terms with her trauma that had formed Nightmare Moon.
After 1,000 years on the moon, her majestys own creation, Luna attempts to adjust to the new pony world around her.
As time goes on,
Luna develops a deep love for her close friend, Twilight Sparkle.
Luna writes in a journal every night to what she wishes she could tell Twilight.
.
.
.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )
Comment posted by Starlight Nova deleted May 11th

The last TwiLuna story I remember being created was back in November 2023, I think this might be the first to be created in 2024.

I hope to see this story completed and will be reading every chapter that gets released, keep up the good work.


And congrats on your first story!

11898683
Thank you! Two new chapters will be posted later tonight!
<3

11901612
Two new chapters posted!
:heart:

“Dear Twilight Sparkle,
One may not be too busy to teach you the flight of an Alicorn.
With new abilities comes great rewards, as long as you are determined enough to overcome the obstacles of learning.
For you, anything is possible.
And for you, one shall gladly give you knowledge of your new wings.
We shall see what happens once we meet.
Let us greet each other first thing after we raise the moon, then we shall have the night all to ourselves, dear Twilight.
One knows of a perfect spot that'll certainly make this the best flying practice ever.

Maybe for someone like Cadance but for Twilight who saves the world, Equestria, and the Crystal Empire, it's more of a responsibility than a reward, especially with the immortal bit and then there is fighting with Tyrek in season 4 which basically proves my point but that hasn't happened yet sooo....


Also I think this is the first story that pointed out that Luna is a lesbian, in most other stories people just assume that she's Bisexual, especially since in those stories it also mentions she had Stallion lovers along with Mare lovers.

Hello everypony!
I absolutely loved writing this chapter. It was so much fun!
Luna definitely has a soft spot for Twilight, and it's so cute!
This pairing makes me so happy.
Another thing,
I would love for some feedback! So please don’t shy away from commenting!
Much love, as always,
- EGO <3

One of the reasons why I like this relationship.

I like both Twilight X Celestia and Twilight X Luna but the second is more my favorite.

It also seems fitting, Twilight come before the night and her cutie mark kinda represents the night sky and her name is the stars that Sparkle at Twilight before Night, not to mention her coat is the color of Twilight.

I wonder if the person who made the design and name for Twilight Sparkle knew what they were doing, there's way to many coincidences.

Books, books, and more books, all neatly surrounding the walls.

My kind of place.

"Please, just Luna."

"Okay, Luna. Do you like jasmine tea?"

Usually it takes 3 chapters just for Twilight to call Princess Celestia just "Celestia" in other stories, interesting it only takes 2 paragraphs for Luna in this story.



Definitely an interesting chapter, I wonder when Luna will confess her feelings and if Twilight has feelings for Luna at this point in time, although it is a possibility considering Twilight could have asked Cadance to teach her how to fly since she was born a Pegasus and could have asked Celestia who is over 1000 years old and is her mentor.

I'm so ready for the next chapter already I'm Finna burst! :pinkiehappy:

11902817
That means a lot to me!
This is actually my first story I have written in over 2 years, so I am a little rusty!
I’m mostly working on gothic poems, so this is a little new for me!
I will definitely update soon :heart:

With this newfound understanding, we feel a sense of liberation. No longer do we have to pretend to be interested in the advances of male ponies, no longer does one have to force oneself to fit into a mold that was never meant for us.
We can now embrace our true self, our true desires. The thought of being with Twilight, of sharing our love with she who understands us, excites us in a way that we never thought possible.
And as we embark on this new journey of self-discovery and acceptance, we feel a sense of peace and contentment that we have never experienced before.
Love, in its truest form, knows no boundaries or limitations.
And we are ready to embrace it wholeheartedly.

Well now I really hope Twilight has the same feelings for Luna when she does eventually confess because if Twilight doesn't, things are gonna get awkward...

If you ever confess your love to someone, always remember that rejection is a possibility and the one you love might not return your feelings, it could always happen and the sooner you realize that getting rejected is a possibility, the less it hurts in case said possibility happens.


Obviously, because this has a romance tag and it's confirmed it's a TwiLuna story obviously means Twilight and Luna are together at the end of the story, but we still don't know when they get together and if Twilight returns her feelings right away, were mostly looking at this through Luna's perspective and not Twilight's so we have no idea what she is thinking.



Also Luna needs to chill with her dreams, don't want this turning rated Mature, do we?

I wish my dreams we atleast half as interesting as Luna's, I rarely dream, atleast average of 2-5 times a year.

11902915
Oh so that explains the layout of the paragraphs, ya I was actually questioning why the layout of the story and paragraphs was like that but didn't ask because it might have come off as rude.

11903790
Yeahhh! The layout of the story definitely hints at the writer (aka me) being a poet. I'm so used to writing on heavily spaced out paragraphs that I forget how to layout an actual story! But I can definitely fix my paragraphs in the future if it bothers you too much haha!
:heart:

11903822
It doesn't bother me. Personally I think it's unique.

Others might not like it as much, I don't really care, it's your story.

11902817
Greetings! New updates posted just today!
:)

Login or register to comment