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Submissions for Comment Exchange IV are now closed. Preference forms have been received and assignments have been send out. The reading period will last until 2024 May 02 20:00 ET.

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Entries (2) submitted!

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Entries to the round are now closed. Here are the submissions:

Entry 1: We Persist

EWe Persist
Raven Inkwell survives until the dawn comes.
daOtterGuy · 1.6k words  ·  37  2 · 373 views
  • Submitter: DaOtterGuy
  • Description:
  • The Author: Is the submitter
  • Tone: As Honest As You Like

Entry 2: Pinkamena’s Wake

TPinkamena’s Wake
Pinkie has a bad Hairdra day, but she’ll make sure everypony else has fun again.
GroaningGreyAgony · 5.6k words  ·  45  2 · 1.6k views
  • Submitter: SparklingTwilight
  • Description: As the author's description warns: "This story is written in the style
    of James Joyce’s Finnegans Wake". The wordplay, allusions, humour, and
    artistry of this tale are well worth the time. One of the site's best
    literary stories.
  • The Author: Neither approved nor disapproved this submission
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 3: Yona gets to smash!

EYona gets to smash!
Yona comes back home for a summer break, only to find out Yakyakistan on the verge of a civil war. The best yak is not going to let that happen! War is stupid, and yaks are smart, therefore yaks will have no war!
Alank2 · 4k words  ·  22  0 · 361 views
  • Submitter: SparklingTwilight
  • Description: Yona practices politics and tells the tale to her friends in this humorous adventure.
  • The Author: Neither approved nor disapproved this submission
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 4: For Want of Cake

EFor Want of Cake
Luna just wants a piece of cake.
AnchorsAway · 1.2k words  ·  18  2 · 869 views
  • Submitter: SparklingTwilight
  • Description: A wry poem that feels like a Shel Silverstein piece.
  • The Author: Neither approved nor disapproved this submission
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 5: Stormy Affair

TStormy Affair
With the wounds of a terrible war still fresh and painful, the ever-dutifully Captain Zephyrina Storm accepts the task of guarding a sworn enemy of the pegasi, an earth pony princess, during the royal's stay in Zephyr Heights.
Jymbroni · 9.5k words  ·  55  3 · 730 views
  • Submitter: Rego
  • Description: From one of my prereaders. He'd probably appreciate it if you went hard.
  • The Author: Neither approved nor disapproved this submission
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 6: The Canterlot Cookie Caper

EThe Canterlot Cookie Caper
Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone!
Marcato · 4.6k words  ·  63  0 · 730 views
  • Submitter: Rego
  • Description: If you want to die of cuteness, this is for you.
  • The Author: Neither approved nor disapproved this submission
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 7: It's Only Coffee

TIt's Only Coffee
Two unlikely lovers take a warm break to enjoy Fall Weather Friends Day in Ponyville.
Rego · 3.4k words  ·  128  11 · 968 views
  • Submitter: Rego
  • Description: My entry for the MxM fic contest. Whoever comments will likely have the honor of the first upvote comment from me on the fic!
  • The Author: Is the submitter
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 8: Misconceptions

TMisconceptions
Luster Dawn makes some assumptions about Lil' Cheese, and puts her hoof in her mouth repeatedly. Cheese Sandwich and Discord have a conversation.
Bicyclette · 2.3k words  ·  108  27 · 1.7k views
  • Submitter: Bicyclette
  • Description: I am quite happy with this one both for the Luster Dawn cringe comedy and for then taking the silly premise seriously in terms of shipping
  • The Author: Is the submitter
  • Tone: As Honest As You Like

Entry 9: Echoes of Loyalty

TEchoes of Loyalty
What cost is worth paying to live in the City above the clouds? Whatever it takes for Rainbow Dash to feel alive.
Silent Whisper · 8.3k words  ·  36  4 · 599 views
  • Submitter: Bicyclette
  • Description: An entry for the first Science Fiction Contest. loved the gritty feel of its worldbuilding and ending
  • The Author: Neither approved nor disapproved this submission
  • Tone: Positive Comments Only

Entry 10: Everfallow

TEverfallow
In the blighted world of the Flim Flam timeline, Big Mac and Zephyr Breeze hold on to the remains of what they've lost.
Bicyclette · 3.5k words  ·  25  9 · 441 views
  • Submitter: Bicyclette
  • Description: My entry for the Cyberpunk Equestria Contest. Biopunk inspired by *The Windup Girl*, with a sad Zephyr Breeze characterization I am very proud of
  • The Author: Is the submitter
  • Tone: As Honest As You Like

Preferences submitted! :derpytongue2:

Bicyclette
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EThe Canterlot Cookie Caper
Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone!
Marcato · 4.6k words  ·  63  0 · 730 views

extremely cute slice-of-life done well, and love how it captures the kind of slice-of-life high fantasy that's almost unique to the MLP setting

Bicyclette
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EWe Persist
Raven Inkwell survives until the dawn comes.
daOtterGuy · 1.6k words  ·  37  2 · 373 views

gripping and short, really did feel like how Raven Inkwell taking charge of a random group of palace staff and guards would feel

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