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Description: As the author's description warns: "This story is written in the style of James Joyce’s Finnegans Wake". The wordplay, allusions, humour, and artistry of this tale are well worth the time. One of the site's best literary stories.
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Yona comes back home for a summer break, only to find out Yakyakistan on the verge of a civil war. The best yak is not going to let that happen! War is stupid, and yaks are smart, therefore yaks will have no war!
With the wounds of a terrible war still fresh and painful, the ever-dutifully Captain Zephyrina Storm accepts the task of guarding a sworn enemy of the pegasi, an earth pony princess, during the royal's stay in Zephyr Heights.
Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone!
Description: I am quite happy with this one both for the Luster Dawn cringe comedy and for then taking the silly premise seriously in terms of shipping
Description: My entry for the Cyberpunk Equestria Contest. Biopunk inspired by *The Windup Girl*, with a sad Zephyr Breeze characterization I am very proud of
Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone!
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Entries (2) submitted!
Entries to the round are now closed. Here are the submissions:
Entry 1: We Persist
- MLP: FiM
- Drama
Raven Inkwell survives until the dawn comes.Entry 2: Pinkamena’s Wake
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Adventure
- Comedy
- Random
Pinkie has a bad Hairdra day, but she’ll make sure everypony else has fun again.of James Joyce’s Finnegans Wake". The wordplay, allusions, humour, and
artistry of this tale are well worth the time. One of the site's best
literary stories.
Entry 3: Yona gets to smash!
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Comedy
Yona comes back home for a summer break, only to find out Yakyakistan on the verge of a civil war. The best yak is not going to let that happen! War is stupid, and yaks are smart, therefore yaks will have no war!Entry 4: For Want of Cake
- MLP: FiM
- Slice of Life
Luna just wants a piece of cake.Entry 5: Stormy Affair
- MLP Gen 5
- Romance
- Adventure
With the wounds of a terrible war still fresh and painful, the ever-dutifully Captain Zephyrina Storm accepts the task of guarding a sworn enemy of the pegasi, an earth pony princess, during the royal's stay in Zephyr Heights.Entry 6: The Canterlot Cookie Caper
- MLP: FiM
- Comedy
- Mystery
- Slice of Life
Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone!Entry 7: It's Only Coffee
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
Two unlikely lovers take a warm break to enjoy Fall Weather Friends Day in Ponyville.Entry 8: Misconceptions
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
Luster Dawn makes some assumptions about Lil' Cheese, and puts her hoof in her mouth repeatedly. Cheese Sandwich and Discord have a conversation.Entry 9: Echoes of Loyalty
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Sci-Fi
What cost is worth paying to live in the City above the clouds? Whatever it takes for Rainbow Dash to feel alive.Entry 10: Everfallow
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Dark
- Sci-Fi
In the blighted world of the Flim Flam timeline, Big Mac and Zephyr Breeze hold on to the remains of what they've lost.Preferences submitted!
- MLP: FiM
- Comedy
- Mystery
- Slice of Life
Little Celestia's peaceful day is interrupted by her younger sister's scream! What could it be? An injury? A monster?? No, worse... the cookies are gone!extremely cute slice-of-life done well, and love how it captures the kind of slice-of-life high fantasy that's almost unique to the MLP setting
- MLP: FiM
- Drama
Raven Inkwell survives until the dawn comes.gripping and short, really did feel like how Raven Inkwell taking charge of a random group of palace staff and guards would feel