Saving A Sunset (An Anon-a-Miss Story)

by WriterStorm PenKey


Comatose

Sunset's mind was all jumbled with herself in the middle floating, dangling above a dark space in her mind. She looked around wondering if she succeeded, is she in the afterlife? Is she in the waiting zone for her to be taken to heaven? she heard an echo of a siren going off it was muffled but it was there she heard a muffled voice along with it, it was raspy she knew that voice, but she did not want to believe it


"Sunset? Sunset? Can you hear me? please stay with us!"


The voice echoed along with several other voices then two others came in


"Mrs. shimmer were taking you to the hospital okay just hang in there."


Sunset put her hands on her ears hoping she could just not hear the voices and somehow get peace then a bright light came into the blackness and a voice that she heard was awfully familiar.


"You're not ready yet Sunset Shimmer, your life is still ahead of you full of life, a potential my former student." then a figure appeared of the princess of Equestria Celestia of all ponies Sunset did not want to talk until she was ready tears came before her eyes, Celestia looked at her then slowly trotted towards her former student, unfolded her right wing, and draped her wing over her crying student.


"I... I failed you princess, you and princess Twilight I tried to get over my past I tried to start over but... but I give up." Sunset sobbed into the princess' white coat. Then the blackness switched to the outside point of view then she heard sobbing she turned around seeing Twilight and Spike right next to her soaking wet out cold body along with Fluttershy who was holding her cold hand trying to feel if she would wake up.


"Where am I, and why is Twilight here?" Sunset asked looking at Princess Celestia with worry, the white alicorn looked at her with a calm neutral look. which still does not make Sunset feel reassured “i’m afraid when you decided to take your life someone called for help and as for where you are you are in a state of comatose after you fell into the water.” Princess Celestia said softly, trying to keep Sunset Shimmer calm.

outside sunset’s subconscious

Fluttershy was sitting next to an unconscious Sunset Shimmer holding her hand tears streaming down her face her teal blue eyes looked down at Sunset, the unconscious girl had a face of despair and peace mixed with tears still on her face it looked like she cried as she fell into the river letting death take her Fluttershy was relieved that Twilight saved Sunset Shimmer from a cold and watery death but a pang of guilt was still in her chest from not believing Sunset, she looked down on said girl and in a whisper she said “i’m so sorry sunset please don't go and please forgive me..”