An attempt to capture a moment in time. Two ponies are out enjoying a simple moment of watching the sunset together when things get disrupted by rain.
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Kaldanor
Hi, I write pony stuff as a hobby. As such, the amount of time I put into it varies. Feel free to ask me questions or send messages but I'm bad at responding in a timely manner.
Kaldanor
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This is a rewrite of a previous project I did that was very similar. It was an interesting project but I feel I kind of failed in my goal the first time around. The original idea was only a few hundred words based on a dream I had. So this is a rewrite of a story, based on a story, based on a dream. Trying to create the emotions without the dialogue was a fun challenge, and what originally lead me to starting Solace in Silence as I wanted to write for a completely mute character.
Anyways, I'll go back to slaving over updates now
Who dared to dislike this!?
Ehem, I mean...uh...
Excellent story, pip pip.
Wow just wow. That story was very good. Great Job.
Was it a dream or a memory...? I'm so sad either way...
...
That sucks.
Good story.
390354 and you keep changing your avatar
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while this is a good piece of writing, and very stirring, it's not really related MLP. no characters, no locations. i think the best thing for you to do with this, is just make it a normal piece of short fiction, and make it about two humans instead of ponies
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Thanks
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Should I tell you or do you want to just wonder?
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I know right? I hate it when that happens to me
390408 Funny, some of the other fics do the same thing and no one really seems to care. I say let em do as he pleases, and let the emotions flow...
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I can see what you're saying, but there are plenty of fics that center around OCs and non established places; and these are still "MLP related." I guess we shall just have to agree to disagree on this point. The original story was quite literally 300 words, and I didn't care enough to expand upon it. Ponifying it is what gave me the urge to even make an actual story out of it; so while I can see your point, I personally disagree.
I'm sad now, and I read this to my friend. She was going all "That's sweet, I didn't know you read those.", but when it got to the end, "Thanks, now I am sad... GREAT JOB!"
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I don't know how to properly respond to that.
I, umm... I'm sorry? You're welcome? Thanks?
390527 It's a good thing. She is hard to get to feel emotion.
As for me, it takes effort, be it from medium large-large to get me to feel. This was good in my book, so for you, it is a 'thanks' moment.
hmm... I'd give thiis story a 3/5.
It wasn't bad, i enjoyed it.
The romance was nice.
And i'm sure everybody has felt the way the main character (2nd person me) has.
It was a good story.
whats going on with the site. this new banner sucks! and everythings all slow
390409 I sort of want to know. also GODDANG THE NEW FORMAT!
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIC SAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNSSSSSS!
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IKNOWRIGHT? MY EYES ARE BLEEDING
Anyways, it's a dream yeah. He is(you are) struggling with that moment when you wake up and the dream seems so crystal clear but slowly fades away.
390732 Ima go out and get a girlfriend. Today.
(In the story)
I HATE comic sans SO much.
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Why is everyone using my fic to complain about the comic sans? THIS ISNT MY FAULT I HATE IT TOO
We know, but the stories aren't updating, so yours has been the most recent for about 3 or 4 hours, so now it's kind of like a forum thread for current events.
And comic sans, dear god comic sans
Beautiful story!
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Thank you
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This needs another chapter, and it was beautifully written
PS: what's Comic Sans?
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Thanks, I don't really think I could do a another chapter though. I feel like it would take away from the ending.
Comic sans is the font that the ENTIRE site is in right now. It is the most overused font on the internet, so there is a running joke in writing, and design circles about how terrible it is.
391039 maybe another story that builds off of this?
and ty for telling me what it meant
Wonderful, if melancholy. Makes me feel wistful.
Time to go check your other story/stories.
I can't put into word how good this was. it was a deep entertaining romance that unlike many wasn't cheesy or unoriginal and you managed a bittersweet end that didn't ruin the whole thing. gotta say love the style of your writing. have a big mac and a thumb.
There is no "window pane" there
JUST THE PAIN OF BEING ALONE!!!
You made me shed a manly tear. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png I applaud you.
Oh, the reminder of normal life, why art thou so cruel?
any way, great story, I too shed manly tears at this one.
The rewrite is up. I'm not entirely sure if I want to continue the story or not. I have the outlines of a story written out that is possible, but I'm not sure if I want to. Continuing the story would require characterizing the main character and in doing that the story would lose some of the appeal I think. I'll think about it, but for now have a (hopefully) better version of the original story.
You have opened a window into my soul, and shoved a great helping of sorrow. joy, and WHY GODDESS. WHY CAN'T I HELP THAT POOR STALLION!!!
In all,
this.
A sad but enjoyable piece. This is something I am sure a good majority go through in there lives. Either with dreams or memories of loves past. Excellent late night reading.
aaa that was lovely ;_;
3886050 Thanks, PP.
2083465 Who said it was a stallion? I'm pretty sure I left it ambiguous.
I was about to make a short story like this, but you beat me by 3 years.
Liked and Faved.
Edit: No...it will also go to the Golden Fave Library.
Other Edit: love it how it's kind of subtle.