What if, when queen Chrysalis invaded Canterlot she won. What if, the Elements Of Harmony were actually destroyed. If you've ever heard the theory of alternate universes. You know that everything that happens in our Equestria, there is another Equestria out there with all the opposites of our actions. This is that Equestria
Lack of capilazation with Chrysalis
Uh thats not promising start
With some of the grammar mistakes in here I had difficulty reading it. It's a good concept but a poor execution.
5656129 i went back on the first chapter and i think i fixed them all. would it be to much to ask if i ask u to check them?
5655510 fixed those to
I liked this.
5656928 thanks! im still writing it of course.
I swear musical is so boring