I'm a recently found brony. I didn't think much of the show untill I watches it as a joke, then I was hooked
This is the squeal to my other story Gentle Red. I would suggest you read it but you don't have to.I think you can get the jest without reading it, but I would sure appreciate it. Thank you and please read and relax.
Ditzy and Macintosh are now married and soon to be parents of new foal, hope everything turns out alright.
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i say they name it after Carrot Top in some way because she's been the best friend and most supportive one in both these fics, hell she's partially responsible for them getting together and she did give them her time share. She's kinda like the sister Ditzy may or may not have.
I'm glad to see that you are continuing one of my favorite stories.
This was very well written and I loved the way that it turned out. The way that the bully had treated both Ditzy and Big Mac is really worrying me, but that's a good thing. I'm pretty sure that he's going to play a much larger role in the story.
I'm not very good at naming things, but since everybody in the apple family is named after apples, it shouldn't be to hard. Maybe something like Crumble? (like the food apple crumble)
Instant fave.
i like it
651783>>651853 I think you're both on to something.....
First name...Relative of Carrot Top?(picked by Carrot Top herself...with Ditzy's Blessing)
Middle Name...."Crumble"?(courtesy of Macintosh)
Last Name....I'm not sure what Ditzy Goes by now....Doo or Apple?
I just hope that the haughty idiot doesn't make trouble for anyone. The last thing we need is for the dimwitted snob to jam it to Big Macintosh because he got owned.
I'd say we call the foal Apple Bobbin, because I was just thinking, and Apple seemed good for a first name. I wanted something to do with bubbles for the second name, but Bobbin sounded close enough and besides, everypony likes apple bobbin'!
Love the
ship! 5 mustaches out of 5. 
back to my previous statement about naming the foal in relation to Carrot Top. these are some suggestions based off of types of the root vegetable:
Nantes
Jeanette
Autumn
Carson
Take one of these and put a farming or food related food and that would make a good name, plus not everyone in the Apple family has Apple in their name, look at the Orange branch of the family tree.
My threat still stands healthy baby or i cut you
OK mayor mare gets cut first
And then we stomp the crap out of Rainbow Dolt...........
Something needs done about the mayor, firing Ditzy just so she can gift wrap a job for her niece has got to be against the law. WTF with firing an expectant mother
Also I know Lazy Dash was trying to help but making Ditzy clean her whole disaster area of a house really rustled my jimmies 
Okay first off wow, I didn't think I could hate a fictional character more than I hate the Mayor Mare good job. what a complete and irredeemable fucking bitch. So, she replaced a pregnant mother of two with a snot nosed teenager. Really there is nothing that you can say or do to make us like the Mayor. She makes Mayor West(Family Guy) and Boss Hog(Dukes of Hazard) seem like fucking Richard Branson. As far as I'm concerned we slash the tires of her Mercedes and pour acetone on the paint and cut the the brake lines.
To quote Fight Club.
"... Look, the people you are after are the people you depend on: we cook your meals, we haul your trash, we connect your calls, we drive your ambulances, we guard you while you sleep. Do not fuck with us."
Then Mac got laid off on his own farm, WHAT THE FUCK?!?! Ditzy had to sell her dignity and become Rainbow's maid(this speaks to me cause my own mother had to work as maid). Seriously the world of your fic is fucked up. Mac and Ditzy should really consider leaving Ponyville for Manehattan to work for his uncle and aunt Orange, they have money and seeing as Mac is good at math, they could use a new accountant because the only thing holding them to Ponyville is Carrot Top and Mac's family, but they could always come back to visit.
Now excuse me, I'm late for my bus.
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Peace Out.
Peace Out.
I cannot describe this chapter with many words, but I'll try my best.
The secretary is a bitch.
The mayor is a bitch.
Rainbow should pay Ditzy more money for cleaning her pig sty.
That is all.
Idea for foal? Um, let's see. Mac's red coat, Ditzy's eyes, pegasus (since Mac hails from a mostly Earth Pony family and Ditzy already has Dinky as a unicorn I thought it would be nice for Ditzy to have a son/daughter to teach how to fly), and name . . . uh, um . . . female: Honeycrisp Apple and male: Russet Apple (Russ for short).
Yup that's it om gonna kill mayor mare *pulls out knife*
Wanna bet that the reason Town Hall got wrecked in "Last Roundup" was that somepony was unintentionally shooting lightning bolts at cardboard and styrofoam? If Mayor McSleeze is greedy enough to latch on to the money AJ needs to pay for her granny's hip replacement, she's crooked enough to skimp on the post-Discord reconstruction effort.
The chapters are fine, no need to push them. I'd rather take the 'short' chapters rather than wait for a really long update. Hopefully we'll get to see who got the honor of naming the new foal. And someone will start a campaign against Mayor Mare for office
FUCK THE PONYVILLE GOVERNMENT!!!
BURN THIS MOTHER FUCKER DOWN!!!
I'm sorry I just got excited when Ditzy told those two off, I still would have had Applejack or maybe Twilight let Celestia know of political corruption in the town. If anything it would help the lives of other city workers (police, garbage collectors, fire fighters). The Mayor doesn't realize that there is a walking mail box to the princess named Spike. Heck they could pay him in ice cream, baked bads, or given him a new apron to send Celestia the news of what those two have been doing.
Also Carrot once again proves that she is the best friend ever. This chapter made me go:
for the morning scene with the foal kicking, 
Mac starving himself, 
Ditzy sticking up for herself, and 
at the end, but at least her friend knows exactly what to say.
"Hey Colonel Trautman can I get Rambo's opinion on the whole situation concerning the mayor?"
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"Well...okay."
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I agree with that last statement, I vote Ditzy or Carrot Top for Mayor and have the old one put in a burlap sack and beaten with rakes.
I wonder if the idiot knows what blowback means. If she pushes Ditzy even further, the other Apples will rain down on her en masse.
I say call a vote and boot the mayors sorry backside off of office, and give the job to somepony who is not a self serving, stuck up *mumble mumble mumble* but I digress.
Grate story, loved the other one and loving this one as well
oh and here's a Scootaloo
for luck
I hope my idea was chosen! Can't wait to see the new foal!
i vote for something carrot related and something apple related like:
Autumn
or
Carson which are types of Carrots.
As for the chapter I loved that in the previous chapter Ditzy was like "I'm bluffing about telling the princess," then it's like psyche you're both fired and hauled off to prison for "scary butt fun".
yay
Well, it's sort of what I expected from Fluttershy. Now that the scarlet foal has arrived, it's time to see what s/he's named.
I was sooo happy to see mayor mare out of that office!
I was laughing so hard at how Fluttershy reacted and why it took Mac so long.
I hope its a pegasus! I also hope it will look like Mac, a little foal Mac would be sooo cute!
But as always
Rainbow, rainbow, rainbow! Ugh! She was so meannnn! And it doesnt help that she is pregnant, I mean cmon!
I liked that you took the reader's advice. I'm very much enjoying this. It ties in so well to the other and of COURSE I had to read it first.
Why did you make his eyes stay walleyed
Well he isnt dead and he was born ok so your off the hook
Dang, was hoping for Russet but Carson works too. Oh well, at least my comment got to decide the type of pony. Yay
I won.
Great chapter, I really hope this foal doesn't turn into Forrest Gump, the only upside to that is he'll teach Elvis how to dance, play ping pong and become a shrimp boat captain. That nurse is rather insensitive, just because someone is wall eyed doesn't mean they're mentally handicapped.
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Carson Carrots
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Nothing wrong with it not being exciting; sometimes we need a little less excitement to get us to really appreciate said excitement when it comes by
Great chapter, but I was kinda hoping to actually see Ditzy beat the hell out of Flim and Flam.
This is my version:
"Your stallion there sent you up here to try and get the bits?" Flim asked. "Well you can forget it!"
Ditzy was getting angry...
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Earlier that week
Twilight had been experimenting with gamma radiation to cure vision problems. Ditzy volunteered hoping that if her vision was fixed then maybe Carson's could be fixed as well. Twilight had strapped her to the chair and everything seemed to be going according to plan; when suddenly a power surge caused a spike in the machine's gamma radiation output. Twilight frantically tried to power the machine down.
(Several hours later)
Ditzy woke up seemingly fine with no complications. They carried on like she had normally without incident until.....
"That's an ugly foal."
"Is he retarded or something?"
It was those two mares from the diner. Ditzy had ran into them as she was taking her son for a stroller ride around town.
"No, he's just different." ditsy said getting angrier with every nasty and hateful word they said to her.
Ditzy felt something build within her and before she knew what happened she snapped out of her daze only to find the two mares being carted off to the hospital.
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(present time)
"Your stallion there sent you up here to try and get the bits?" Flim asked. "Well you can forget it!"
Ditzy was getting angry.
"Stop you're making me angry, you won't like me when I'm angry."
Flim and Flam in unison shoved the grey mare. "Oh yeah what is some wall-eyed retarded pegasus and with her bastard offspring gonna do about it." They taunted her.
Ditzy's pupils started to dilate and her vision turned red with rage as she could no longer control the beast within. The brothers took a break from their laughter to see the grey mare's coat turn a bright shade of green and her body contort into a "hulk" of muscles.
They saw her lumber towards them and they readied their magic, but it was too late. with a quick motion Derp snapped their horn off and began to mercilessly beat them into a pulpy mess. "DERP SMASH, PUNY JERKWADS!!!!"
When it was over Ditzy claimed the money and returned being the best wife, best friend and best mother in Ponyville just as long as you don't make her angry.
The End.
692482 That would have been an interesting way to handle it, but it would have been funny
My guess is that they're singing soprano for a while. This is because "rear hooves of Pegasus pony + family jewels of con artists = profit."
I really liked this chapter, maybe you could elaborate on what ditzy did to the brothers? I'm assuming that you didn't for a suprise in the future chapters.
Great job. Keep it up
Me knowing how John Henry ended, I thought big mac would have won but at least put in the hospital, but anything to keep the family happy and with bits, is fine by me!
Great chapter, loving it as it reminds me of what me and the missus when through with our first child. I lost my job a month before she was born and it was three months after she was born I was final able o find work, so it worked out in the end ... just
This reminds me of a song, but I can't remember. It had something to do with the dad once having a job but losing it so he had to stay home to watch the kids while the mother went out and worked, leaving the dad to deal with what the mother dealt with every day. I think it was Mr. Mom or something
As Confucius say: "Shit happens."
You gotta wonder how dumb Mac is, not for the whiskey, because my parents did that too, but because he didn't learned the three rules of being married and those are:
1. Yes dear
2. Shut the fuck up.
3. Never make what you do sound harder than what she does especially if that is raising children.
Mac comes from the school of being the parent that gives in and thus being the good guy. If Dinky wanted a piercing Mac would probably say "yes" after Ditzy said "no."
It breaks my heart to hear them argue. Please say there will be better days!
2 things
1 i knew he was gonna get whiskey
2 you are the only author who makes me want to hurt something when something bad happens in a story
703116 Is that a good thing?
703218 well made me want to cut you when you killed the first baby
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I agree with statement number 2, I never felt more rage than I do when reading this fic and it's predecessor. Don't get me wrong I enjoy both fics a lot, but I can't help feel that both of us reading want blood when something bad happens.
I'm not a violent guy, but when the miscarriage happened I wanted to resort to mob violence. Then when you made the Mayor completely unlikeable I wanted to write a grim dark story involving the Mayor and that is something I never do. It's weird that Collins4112 brings out the worse in the readers, it's like he invented weaponized hatred.
703317 In all honesty, I kinda write to change it up a bit. If you ever read a FlutterxMac a lot of them are the same. No offence to people who write them or read them, but all of them are so sweet it gives me diabetes.
I'm Liking this story, as a farther myself (I'm only 30 don't go to mad as how old this makes me sound) I have been through it all, from a miscarriage to some very bad days. including losing my job just before our first child was born ... I find your story a good realistic read with a good dash of comedy keep up the good work.
Great. Super. You've turned him into John Patterson on hooves. It's For Better or For Derp.
I really liked this chapter, It really seems like something that mack would do, give whiskey to a kid. But I think that this entire chapter makes him seem a bit out of character. Mac wouldn't do something without telling ditzy, even after he saw that the asprin worked just as well, and I don't think that he would brag about how much harder his work was. I'm just going to assume that Mac acting all weird is due to something happening at the farm or eslewhere.
This is still a great story though, I love it.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
Eeeep. The plot thickens.