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Octavia has a side to her that most don't see. In what may be her last note, she reveals the other side to life as a cellist.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 26 )

Wow, it'll be Blueblood\Octavia? Rare pairing, but very potent! Tracked! :pinkiehappy:

:fluttercry: awww poor octavia.. I LOVE YOUR MUSIC!!! :raritycry:

Very moving first chapter, tracked and favorited. :twilightsmile:

Very nice indeed!

Wow... Octavia experiencing such crushing self-defeat... very well done, I liked the way it was written. Very tragic.
You've got yourself a favorite, a track and some stars :pinkiesmile:

Blueblood and octavia......wow...never expected such combo.....lets see....Track this story...checked.....watch this guy....checked.....:yay:

If you had some time at all do help giving some feedback on my story too...just click on my profile name and ur know where to start looking...:pinkiehappy:

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wut?

#8 · Dec 7th, 2011 · · · Part 2 ·

:rainbowhuh: What happened to him? Did her music give him a heart attack or something?

I'm pretty sure that he just freaked out when the cello broke. One of those breaking would likely be very startling.

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I think I've seen you around before....


In any case, it was the cello breaking, yes.

hmmm.... good job, i say. :pinkiecrazy: love me some octavia. haha

...i still say BlueBlood is still a dick.....:pinkiecrazy:
.....OCTAVIA!!!! Y U NO HIT HIM WITH UR CELLO!!!:twilightangry2:

The story as a whole went a bit fast, but overall it was good. There was real emotion in it. I do think though that it would have been a bit more enjoyable if it was a bit more drawn-out :pinkiesmile:

Sorry guys.

Couldn't leave well enough alone.

This... is interesting.

That was intense. Short but intense.

i don´t exactly know how to feel about this... it is well enough written to believe... emotional enough to cry...i give up.
but you can count on it that i´ll rate it befitting to your skill.

i figured it out
last time i felt this strange towards a fanfic was "bittersweet" and by all means this is up there with it in terms of quality.

Ow, my heart... :fluttershysad:
Beautiful bittersweet ending.

Intriguing work, well done.

You almost got me to openly cry in class.:fluttercry:

So basically, musicians are at the absolute bottom of the Equestrian social ladder for some reason, even though they frequently play at high society gathering, and Celestia - the near perfect immortal sovereign with absolute authority - can't do anything to support the arts even though she really wants to? :rainbowhuh:

I dunno. You were on to something in the beginning with Tavi going on about her insecurity. She actually sounded a lot like those perfectionist authors who insist their writing is worse that it actually is. You went a bit over the top at the end, though.

I told you before that I was gone. Please, if you cannot bear to watch the conclusion to my tale, imagine that it ended there, that Blueblood and I were to be in love forever.

Sweet, I get to choose! Happy ending it is! :pinkiehappy:

*ignores the rest of the chapter, upvotes*

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