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Credo Quia Absurdum. Pic by Magello

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What happens when a rent-a-car worker encounters visitors from another world? And what happens when he makes friends with them?

I guess you'll just have to stay tuned and find out.

My name's Finn Kelly...or at least, it was... and this is my story.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 13 )

Honestly I think this is a pretty good idea but it has little conflict after chapter 4 so you could make a problem for them to resolve but other than the very few (probably) typos it's perfect

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that's the next bit I'm workshopping at the moment. hopefully, once the holidays calm down, I'll be in a better headspace to finish it up

9991321
Well then good luck with it

Can we get a picture of Finn's new look please?

10144916
I'll monkey around on PonyMaker before I publish the next chapter.

Got a couple things I want to set up there before the...well, I'd say "reveal", but you all know what's coming and it's got flashing red lights on it.

I liked the "Airplane!" reference and I look forward to how this story goes. :twilightsmile:

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You don't mess with the classics.
Glad you're enjoying it :)

10147158
No you do not at, I loved watching that film along with Airplane II: The Sequel and the Naked Gun trilogy.

You're very welcome.

Got a good laugh when Trixie needed help removing her pants. LOL :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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They say Comedy is Tragedy plus Distance.

Finn will be experiencing a lot of Comedy in short order.

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I got to the chapters where he ends up in Equestria and turned into an Earth pony.

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I'm glad you liked them!

I'll have the next arc written at some point in the near future, but for now this is what I've got put together.

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You're very welcome. :)

That's very good to hear, I look forward to reading them.

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