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Neon Icy Wings


Imagine, have fun, be true. Tally ho!

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Life is odd, really. You never know exactly what will happen, or if something is good or bad. Or if it will stay good or bad in the long run. Such thoughts only ever brought me anxiety. Such thoughts are all I really have anymore.

I was just a normal brony, enjoyed the show, the fanart, the music, and sure, I had my daydreams of going to Equestria. But, waking up in the Everfree forest as a pegasus of the wrong gender, without a memory of how I got there, before Twilight ever left Canterlot, really puts things in perspective.

Surviving the forest, Nightmare Moon, Discord, the Changelings, all of that will be easy, it's the lack of internet and inevitable socializing that has my skin crawling. Well, that and me potentially ruining the timeline with my sheer existence, that isn't fun either. That is, if the timeline doesn't ruin me first, or was already ruined to begin with!

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Somewhat self insert, and unwilling, but not too bothered genderbend, since some people can't stomach that, fair enough.
Warnings will be added and described as needed.
Story is slice of life with potentially heavy adventure elements at times.

This is just a, hopefully, low stress story to do on the side and have fun with, while my more in depth and complicated stories are forged. As such, things can go in many directions if it brings wondrous fun, adventure or drama I can have fun writing.

Now with cover art drawn by me! Huzzah! (3/19/2023)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 11 )

Looks good so far! I am going to be watching for this one!

Esto parece que va a ser interesante

keep up the awesome chapters!!!!~

I like where this is going but there needs to be more!!!

Bit of a rough introduction to some of the locals, but at least some friends were made!

Have to wonder, will any abilities come with the name now you've "remembered" it in full? Or will a talent/Cutie Mark be formed? Maybe joining a winter-time weather patrol with Rainbow would result in glowing ice forming on her wings? Be pretty cool, but that's all speculation.

Looking forward to meeting the rest of the main/secondary characters. The story of how Neon got here would probably be considered a "bad influence" on the Crusaders, unless the scars could count as a warning against going into the Everfree...

Overall, nice chapter! Thanks for the update!

I think make shorter but more frequence chapters would make the story more consistent.

Just found this, and gotta say, it's fun to see an SI story that doesn't immediately start rehashing episodes.
I like the start, it's written well enough (a few typos here and there) the characters are believable and your SI isn't strangely over powered, yet, that could change.

I look forward to the interactions with the main cast and to see what knowledge of events Neon chooses to act on

Nice chapter can’t wait to see more

It's... good, but something's off. It kind of feels like the author is trying a bit too hard in making flowery descriptive language. Still, as good of a first chapter as any.

Love the banter between the two

Well that was one of the fictions of all time, I guess

Love the story can’t wait for the next chapter!:twilightsmile:

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