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TasteDaRainbow


Don't lose the Moon, while counting the Stars

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This story is a sequel to Ranger's Destiny (Undergoing Edited)


This is it. This is our final mission. Capture Mustafa alive. Do or die, we have to catch him. Little did we know that we're going to another fucking realm.


After fighting in Equestria for like eternity, the rangers finally made it back to Earth and fight again to save the world. But when Daniel, Chase, and Forbes were tasked to capture Mustafa Ammar alive, they were teleported to another human realm that they have no idea where it was. But it didn't surprise them because they have been in a world of ponies. What they didn't expect, is an army awaiting for their death.

T for the harsh languages.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 24 )

Noticed a lot of grammatical errors, but apart from that seems like an interesting story. I'll follow it.

10348978
Yeah, I still need to fix my grammar. I'm terrible at it.

10349042
Eh its storywriting, theres always gonna be mistakes.

I like this story, and especially protectors of harmony. Its just the grammar kills it a little. If you want, we could talk about me proofreading what you write. Let me know if you're interested, I can respond in a few hours.

10356308
I'll definitely take that offer.

Update pleeeease?

10359990
I'm sorry that this is taking a long time to update, cause right now I'm focusing on the second World War story of mine. But don't worry though, this story will be updated just like it used to be.

10356527
sorry about the late response, I want to get working on it but a family thing came up. maybe a week or so? Hard to say but I'll start on the world war 2 one as soon as I can.

10366858
Meh, no problem mate! I'm always here btw and never leave this page. And take care of your family first brother. They are the most important person in life. So don't waste your time to just to proofread my story. If you had a problem, just go and handle it first. I don't mind.

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Damn, Daniel, you got me hooked again!! I have got to follow this!

Nice chapter my boi, waitin on the next one!!!

Nice.....waiting for more.

Cool story

IT'S BACK!!!

"Then what are you going to do when someone tried to kill you. You just sit there and accept the faith that you're already dead?" Chase was about to retort but he couldn't find a word for it. The terrorist shook his head, "No. I have promised myself to live my life to the fullest. I know my wife and my daughter wants me to be happy. But with all of this, I couldn't find it. Not just yet until I find a way to escape from his tyranny." The terrorist looked back at Daniel defeatedly. "I am sorry."

There... Grammatical error.
And this fic is perfect btw.

10904375
Okay, I missed that lmao. Thanks dude! <3

10904378
That was nothing pal.:ajsmug:

Nice one dude....great as always.

Can't wait for the next chapter. So far one of the better sequels I have read. Keep up the good work.

nice, cant wait for next update

11036223
Should be released soon my friend, don't you worry, the story is still in progress. :twilightsmile:

Is there going to be another update..? I'd hate to see this story die so soon; it's been amazing.

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