Looking gwood.
I'm thinking...If there's one thing I may need to go over once the story is done it's Cadance’s character and influence on the story...hmm. Ostensible, she’s the Gaston of the story. (Still haven’t used that line, “No one does love, like Cadance.” Cadance said.)
And, aah….Ch. 5 is haunting me still….aahh. Not particularly happy with it but it felt necessary to kick the story forward...where o where art thou noble editors and critics…