Dec
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2016
More re editing after current editing · 11:57pm Dec 7th, 2016
So a friend of mine looked at the story and, you're not going to believe it, there is still some work to be done. The key item he noticed, at its something that flew way over my head, was dialogue variation. So far (according to my friend), its: "...." x person noted, "....", y person said <- where's the variation? It doesn't feel like full, fleshed out story now that I think about it. So here's what's going to happen: I am going to finish my current editing process with the plan of attack I
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#revamping
#editing
#reediting
#rewriting
#dialogue variation
#re working
#too much work
