The first person has a few literary shortcomings, but I think it helped this chapter. The colt is necessarily stuck narrating within his headspace, but he should grow out of it as he learns to speak. (Chapter 7 should start that.)

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This Author's Note got pretty long, so I thought it was best to put it in a Blog Post. As you can see, there is a lot.

Ponice Document
CC = Canterlot Calendar. This calendar began after the capitol of Equestria was moved from The Castle of the Two Sisters to Canterlot.
F = female
M = male
NP = nature-pony**
P = pegasus

Kiger is a breed of mustang whose coats fade to black around their lower-legs down to their hooves.

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