Sorry but the next chapter's still in production; I decided to tinker and then had a Great Idea™ and that spun out of control and... yeah.... I should (feelers crossed) be ready to post it on Sunday.

It's not ready.

I'm doing a rewrite it and, yeah, it's just not quite working yet and I have to head in to work soon. I'll hopefully have it ready to publish tomorrow.

Sorry for the delay.

Squeezing together the fuzzy brown caterpillars above her tiny green glaring eyes.

This simple sentence gave me so much trouble in The Woman! It felt right, but also wrong somehow; should there be commas wedged into those lists of adjectives? Or not? I wasn't sure. So I turned to The Only Grammar Book You'll Ever Need and the internet for help.

It's a question of if they are "compound" or "coordinate" adjectives.

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