I need somone to have a look at the first six or seven chapters in https://www.fimfiction.net/story/545924/team-superstars-winds-of-change (you can go a bit further if you wish, but no further than the 10th chapter, anything unpublished under that is riddled with errors as they are incomplete)

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The fact that on this story. Thanks to an idiot ad bot going “Hurr Durr. Let’s advertise here.” The comment count does not match the actual comments.

It’s so infuriating that I wanna scrap and rewrite the whole thing from scratch!

TTeam Superstars: Winds of Change

• MLP Gen 5
• Adventure

Who knows that finding a filly on a beach can be the start of your journey? A stylist of Maretine Bay sure was not aware

• Alt. Universe
• Other
• Thunder
• Zoom

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But this would either be the 2nd or 3rd time I tried to make this G5 AU