Life isn't easy and it's even harder when you don't have a million bits to invest in your Apple Farm and it's even harder than that when you know that somepony else does! Everyday it becomes more apparent that Applejack has no choice but to justify this unfairness the world has sprung upon her and such, with a little push from her younger sister, she sets off to get back what should originally been hers.
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It was... fast. I like it, I think, but it was pretty fast. I can see how FS might have arrived at that conclusion based on the circumstances, but the whole thing felt... I don't know, off. And one little piece of advice:
Don't put those hearts in the text. They have to rightful place being there. It's unprofessional.
This is actually one of your more cuter fics. The story was still as crazy as usual, but it just somehow... worked. I don't even know how you pulled it off, but you did.
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Where do you think you are?
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Subtle progression from silly-stupid to silly-cute~
So Kawaii!
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I can see where it felt off: Applejack's motivation and justification of action. Also the fact that she tells others of her problems(Applebloom) when they really couldn't understand. I know it was for exposition, but there could have been another way.
Cute story though.
Yes. What is there left to say but yes. What is even worth saying, other than yes?
Nothing. Just yes. Yes to this
"oof"
Me before reading, But liked the story anyways!