Not gonna lie... This sounds awesome. Gonna have to give this a read later on.

not bad of a story nightmare not bad indeed

665887 Same here

665913 ah we meet again good sir

also gimme chapter two

Interesting start.

665930 In 3 Days With Luck Will Be Done... Also The Down Vote A Lil Explanation Why ?... Also Contains... Ponies With ... Well... D...I....Etc

Wait.. You Are Not In Steam Nither Skype... Big.. Care To Explain ?

665965 wasnt me i alrdy liked it remember :/ haters on everything tho

665975 Not For U Only For General, I Want To Know What I Have Done Wrong.. And If Somebody Don't Like And Down Vote Without Explaining It Then Don't Read It And Gtfo

665989 pfff people do that all the time

665975

Sup big

665995 Well... It's Idk Like This [Hurr Durrr Ima Derp, Let's Read Fim... Lol Don't Like Down Vote And Cheese It]

666004 exactly

665998 what up my honky

666018

nothin much bro nothin much

just asking when is the new chap of chronicles coming

666024 when i get round to it, but magicka's featured so ill be putting more time into that

666035 Nananana Big Used Thunder... It Killed Nightmare

666035
where i dont see it all i see is different fics

"I did want to come..." Spent about 5 minutes laughing.

666112 Innuendos Are Magic...

And Again With Down Votes And No Explaining..Here Have Some I Don't Care But At Least Explain Why

puu.sh/wXzh
puu.sh/xB8z

666004
I call them "Down-vote Deterers...ers"
I've read plenty of bad-fics and the comments that come with them (some of them very extreme).
And I conclude that your story is not worthy of down-vote....yet...if ever .
Use this chart I made up out of nowhere:
Ups - Downs = 10+: Gratz to you. Your story is probably on the "Popular Stories" list
Ups - Downs = 50+: Your story is probably on the first two(or three) slots of the "Featured" list
Ups - Downs = ~200+: You story is more or less still on the "Featured" list and will remain there until whenever
Ups - Downs = 500+: If you can get this high with two different stories, you'll be popular and people will up-vote your stories on name alone
Ups - Downs = 1,000+: You were blessed by the Fanfic Gods.

Ups - Downs = -5 or less: Story needs some work and comments will usually be constructive advice
Ups - Downs = -15 or less: You better have a good explaination (or tell people to not take it seriously). You'll get obligatory "Dafuq did I just read!"
Ups - Downs = -25 or less: If you are high, prepare to be shot down...hard. It can and will only get worse from here.
Ups - Downs = -35 or less: The Shitstorm has reached a magnitude of 11.243! Abandon Ship!
Ups - Downs = -50 or less: You must have wrote one horrible/awesome troll-fic. Or, "How The FUCK did this shit pass moderation!"
Ups - Downs = -60 or less: Buck the "or less" part. You are getting/must be getting legit hate/GTFO/FU/death threat comments
Ups - Downs = -80 or less: May the Fanfic Gods and every god from every religion in the known universe damn you to whatever bottomless hellhole you somehow slithered out of

TL;DR, I like the story so far; you put emphasis on your details or describe the same object a different way.
TL;ADR, If you ain't getting those 3 or 4 random down-votes you are doing something wrong.......or your story was so good not even "trollers gonna troll."

nice now i read it all at once.
"Johnson (Known as Grizzly)" thats too funny bro
ill be here next chapter.

This is good so far and the future looks promising. I'm am slightly disappointed that Spike didn't go, but that's probably just me being a raging Spike fan. Anyways, good stuff.

Interesting. Looking forward to chapter 2

This is gonna get featured, I can tell! XD

666745 Hey At least You Explain Yourself Also Thanks For The Chart

667265 ....I Dind't Say That Maybe In the Future Will Be Side Fics.. Also... Time Alone, Library,,, So Much Possibilities

665942 You're gonna love chapter 2

668488
No problem. Keep up the good work and you'll get 50+ in no time.
Oh, and the chart is more or less accurate. But it never applies to a well done troll-fic. 0.o

668561 Oh Why thank You... Here Have A Preview Of Next Chapter...

puu.sh/vR68

668565
True Fact: I have never clopped to clop-fics before. No really
True Fact: I read clop-fics for the plot. No really
Marq's Honor: If I clop, I told myself to always love the person who made me. Maybe you'll be "The One"

668580 puu.sh/nLwv

Good start. Please continue.

668642 Don't Worry
puu.sh/olN8

669169
Thanks
Maybe this list can be useful

@Nightmare
Challenge Accepted

While I don't like when fics disregard established continiuity (twi not knowing that they was gettin married etc) I'll make an exeption for this fic becuse how well written it is so far! I hope you keep the style of writing and don't go straight into super clop right away in chapter 2 (even though I can't wait for the clop lol).

I'll hold my thumbs up hostage until chapter 2, if you keep the same quality you'll get favorited, thumbed up and 5 out of 5 :D

669223 Well next chapter will be the same style... only wiht clop and some comment up there warns you about what you will encounter.. also ...

669257 Well Sorry I Discussed This WIth My Grammar Nazis Or Prereaders And Didn't Say Much About I'll See What I Can Do

When is chapter 2 coming out

669257 Do you mean a new paragraph, e.g:

"....." Said Pinkie

"....." Replied Twilight...

Instead of:

"....." Said Pinkie
"....." Replied Twilight...

I think I know what you mean...

669270 Soon In 3 Days Top

669314 Let Me Think About It....

puu.sh/wX8i

669311 Okay, well I've nearly finished chapter 2, so I'll bear that in mind when I write my next story...

Cheers=3

669336 Excuse When I'm truly Psychotic As It Says My Doctor, So Don't Worry I Will Make U Suffer ,Also Don't Like The Lulz ? Well Then Leave My Shift Key Alone puu.sh/ubVP

669391 I Must Say But You're not Worth Of Wasting My Time Storm Trooper,

669432 Well IF You Read Up there I Do For The Lulz Not For Annoying You, Also You Messed Wiht My Shift Not My Fault

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i want more, tell me where, where is the link

671524 First You Have To Defeat Chtultu

uhh terraria reference?

like "eye of cithulu" or whatever

i just now noticed that the picture is ponies, with condoms in their teeth, i like