691990 Exactly

I CAME!

I did like this clopfiction. It was pretty good and descriptive. This helped me to better write than I did before.
Thanks!

692007 I Feel Dirty... I Will Go Get The Fuel....And Get A Good Fire Shower...

RUN IT'S MOLESTIA!

692031 Check Now The Finale

692014Well, you have to write the next chapter first. THEN take a fire shower.

692097 Maybe In The Future Will Be More As A Sequel, But For Now BE Grateful of 15k Of Pure Clop

692108Sure! I am grateful, and can't wait for more stuff from ya!

HE HE 69 likes

Fairly decent. Here's your feedback:
* If this is supposed to be actual Cadance (that's the official spelling BTW), then her magic is blue, not green.
* I get what you were going for, but I really can't picture how they all fit in there together. Sometimes, you just have to accept you can't actually stack this many ponies on top of each other in a way that still lets them move and fuck.
* Do you like bananas, Cadence? Cause you're about to be stuffed with bananas!
* I'd like to see how Shining Armor fits into all this. Partner in crime? Just as long he hasn't been oblivious to his girlfriend's lifestyle (then again if her special talent is lovemaking, maybe she got it with him?), that would be weak.

Still probably the longest clop scene i have ever read... love the ending, she totally likes banana;'s
You guys and your fancy "authors notes" well I'ma be Grizzly right here in the comments with everypony else
This was fun/disgusting/hilarious to pre-read/read. well until next time gents, enjoy.
still cant believe you put the cheerio hotdog in there lol...

O wow just wow im not sure what i should say

clop too long

692649 .... Be Grateful That None Of This People Has Seen... THAT Thing..

692594 Well Excuse Me For The Candance, Nobody Noticed Sorry.

Well I Can PIcture That

ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

...It's A Week Before The Wedding... But Maybe I Can Think Of Something.... Yes Something Dirty....

That was insane. I loved it!!!!!!

694068 This Is Funny People Like Say That Like It , People Don't Like It Don't Say Anything To Improve

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695412 Get Ready Cause Here I Come
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696716 GIVE MEH THE SOURCE OF DAT EMOTICONS
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here you go.
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of course with the *[img]* stuff

696756 .. The Next Chapter Of Steamy Summer Nights.....

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Nah..

WOW. just wow. really good story right there but what the hay did i just see

One minor mistake (as the magic colour's already been mentioned): The term is actually "her sole objective," not soul. I can see why that'd get mixed up though.

Otherwise very entertaining and descriptive.

Liked, was hilarious.

696716 ALL THE HOMO!!!!!!

696769 I see what you did there.
Mystery Science Theater 3000.
I'm not the only one who's seen that movie WOOT
Question: Do you do your own art?

698898 IMPOSIBRU!

Rainbow pushed as hard as he could,

You editors...

her pink tongue poked out little more than the tip. She glided the fruit all the way down her tongue, her lips curl at the sides with an air of darkness only accomplishable by a princess of her caliber.

In this one, the writing changes tense... Was this my fault? If so, how did you miss that?

P.S, where the hell are these people getting custom emoticons from? :lyra: If this works, I will lol. If not, here's a Pinkie

>as Cadence’s horn flared a luminous green
I see what you did there... I think.

697692 Pron

697925 Thanks For Pointing That

703526 If You Know What I Mean ¬¬

WOW! I just finished this... I came... many times. Not many authors do Herm (at least not well) so this was a pleasant surprise to get 15K words of hermy clop I kinda hope that you're planning on continuing this though, perhaps including the princesses or Shining.

The ending left me a bit meh though (personal preference, I've never really liked meme based endings).
Most of the criticisms I may have brought up have already been stated (the color of the magic & the unwieldiness of a 7 pony pile) but just 1 extra note, ponies don't have a gag reflex like humans; they wouldn't choke and gag on dicks because it's physically impossible for them.

710969 ¬¬ Anyways I Need To Go Take A Shower, Yes There WIll be MAybe A Sequel, Ask Still Breeze Co.Writer

668580

I thought i was the only one! I literally only read clopfics because of the story lines. Like, romance reports for example, it had one of the best fan-fic story lines ever. I could care less whether i was supposed to clop, it was a damn good story!

710969 Huh.. I didn't know that... INTERESTING!

Anyway... The basic fact of the matter is... It's clop... In that sense... A 7-way is allowed...

On another note about the imperfect storyline: Someone did point out at the start that they don't like it when the story doesn't run cannon with the show; neither do I... BUT, BECAUSE this is clop, (And especially futa) I usually would disregard the show's storyline..

Also, what does 'herm' mean?

715351 I Thought You Would Know Dumbass.... It Means... Both... Equipments.. All Time, And Yes It's Like Futa But With ... Balls (In Case Of Ball Emergency)

697692 Mah Boi You Have Seen What True Warriors Strive For... Sex Lot's Of Sex

695412 It Will Be

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715351
Well, 715354 explained that rather succinctly although to give a *bit* more explanation, "herm" is simply a shortening of the word "hermaphrodite" meaning possessing both male & female genitals. It is a rare thing to see in most clop where they'll usually just gender swap or transform the vagina into a penis.

I didn't mean to indicate that you couldn't or shouldn't have a 7 pony pile, just noting that the physics of it can get a bit hard to describe & imagine.

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Just a quick notice, it's "Appleloosa", not "Appaloosa".

736747 Damn You And Yer Fancy Grammar

737123

Why you no like my grammar?

Anyway, this is awesome. Totally dirty, but awesome.

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Very nicely written story

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I'm going to say something I saw someone else said: I came, I saw, and I came again

This is, without a doubt, the longest clopfic I have ever read. And it wasn't half bad. Glad I finally got around to reading it after having it in my 'Read Later' list for several months.

767291 puu.sh/yMaO

THIS STORY GAVE ME ALL OF THE CANCER!!!!