I'm so glad this was posted. I've been waiting for a Sunflash story like this for so long.

Good. 7.5/10

Pretty good story! plus I like FlashxShimmer :D

Pretty good, but the tenses are a bit wonky.

sooo.... sunset gonna get pregneant? because i wanted to see how their relationship goes

Thank you everyone for the comments. I appreciate it.

First: I did enjoy the story. Good pace, not to fast, no chringy prose.
Second: "veiny fuckstick" and "youthful babymilker" has to be the worst synonymes.

7738613 Thanks The Frank! I'm glad you liked the story, but don't worry! I've got lots more! xD

Best Flashimmer fic ever!
Loved it, sexy, nice and juicy!

Any chance you'll make a sequel to this? I would love to see more of these two, having fun.

8071038 Thanks for your words, I'll be sure to get around to that.

8082836 I'm looking forward to it!!

8082836
Kinda wondering if what they did took. It didn't sound like Sunset was on birth control and who knows how long until she can get to the store for a morning after pill with them out in the wilderness like this.

8084233 She could get pregnant! If she didn't take anything for it, then... i'll have too write on that too!

8084822 I would like to see that too.

8084822
Oh please do!

Impregnation has always been one of my favorite fetishes.

This was good sexy fun. Sweet as well, which is always nice. Great to see some Flashshimmer love