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Published 14th Dec 2016
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What comes up...always comes down. - Arkidonius

Rarity dosen't always have it together, and sometimes, it is hard to take...

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Tito Vito

Tito Vito #1 · Dec 15th, 2016 · · ·

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Mood was kind of forced with obviously intentional grammatical errors, but overall it was a fine read.

7/10

Arkidonius

Arkidonius #2 · Dec 15th, 2016 · · ·

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7795388 Hey thanks! The mood was rather forced, you aren't wrong. I had to ship it out before corrections because of my Chemistry Final, but I will go back and fix them. I appreciate the help though :D

Tito Vito