nice work do you think you can do a chapter of your old stories like Symbiotic relationship

Contains Suicide

What great timing you have for this story there.

Guess you could say this story ate ass. I’m sorry for the shit pun, I’ll escort myself out. (No offense)

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I know, right? What with Holy.

I'm sorry, this story needs a basic proofread. The person who wrote this needs to work on splitting characters up into separate paragraphs.
Hence;

"Have you heard what happened?" one person asked.

"Sorry, all I know is they found a body hanging in the nearby trees," said another.

"Such a shame," another said, "he was quite cute and adorable".

And not;

"Have you heard what happened?" one person asked. "Sorry, all I know is they found a body hanging in the nearby trees," said another. "Such a shame," another said, "he was quite cute and adorable".

This is a great example of when your deviantart-tier fetish outstrips your writing ability.

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