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Fluttershy is dead. But that's okay, Twilight can fix it. She can fix anything.


Written for Science Fiction Contest 3

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

Starting to read this! Hope it's good.

Well that's a delightfully punny title! :twilightsmile:

Love Twilight's neurotic disposition. Feels like a callback to Season 2.

Ended on a really quick note. I was hoping to see the other friends' reactions. Whatever, great story.

Hello, fellow contestant! Your friendly neighborhood Hat Man, here!

I think this story finds its stride in the second and third chapters, where the horror and tragedy are allowed a bit more breathing room, though I do agree that the ending feels a little quick. The first chapter has a bit of a weird tone, though, and some of the grisly bits clash with the darkly comedic tones of the story.

Definitely an interesting story! Nice job!

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