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AngelShy24


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This story is a sequel to Cream the Rabbit comes to Ponyville


Solar Dusk escapes into a new world with the help of a new accomplice, and sends Equestria into panic.
Now, Fluttershy and the rest of her friends must travel into this new world and reunite with an old friend and more to find Solar Dusk and bring him down before its too late.
Unfortunately, Solar and his new partner are one step ahead of the heroes, and chaos will soon ensue.

NOTE: (every sonic hero will not be in this story)
Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are also in this story.
Cover art made by: Fuzon-S

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 92 )

You are cruel to bring the sequel I have so much to read!!!!!

Dragon:moustache:

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Don't worry, it won't continue for a while, you have time.

i love it and yay finally the sequel is up i have been wait a long time for this

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*phew* I had a Little heart attack there. :rainbowlaugh:

Dragon:moustache:

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And now you have to wait some more:trollestia:
So sorry.

Glad to finally see a sequel.

finally read the chapter. :ajbemused:
The horrors of Eggman and Solar Dusk working together. :raritydespair:
Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:
But seriously not yet. :twilightoops: Still got so much to read. :derpyderp2:

Dragon:moustache:

i love it and i will bear with you

Heh, don't worry, we can wait. Great job so far, by the way, nice to read this story some more. Good luck with it, I'll be keeping my eyes out for more updates.

There are three things I want to talk to you about, the things that I want to talk about despite my break from C&C'ing, that is.
> It is spelled 'Shining Armor', no extra 'n' in it.
> 'Princess of the Night' is a title, so you may want to capitalize the 'n' in 'night'.
> This isn't really anything to worry about right now, since it would counted as a misunderstanding from Solar's point-of-view. And, I am sure you know about this. But, just in case, remember that 'Eggman' is just a nickname, his real name is Ivo Robotnik (it is official).

No worries man. I'm giddy to no end to read more, but I can wait.
And with the things to read I won't have to wait even a second. :rainbowlaugh:

Dragon:moustache:

I will bear with you. Because Metal Sonic.

Ah nice to see this updated loved the first one ^w^

Yay, this has been updated~! And, now the gang is on Mobius, and the first person they meet is Big. If the location to where they drop down at is where I think it is, then I am not that surprise, considering all the mystical nature involving the area (and if you did it intentionally, I will pat you on the back). Heh, it seems Rainbow Dash has yet to learn about not jumping the gun with clear evidences, though I doubt it would bother someone like Big.

C&Cs:
...at the library at 10am sharp
> Forgot the ending mark.
“Okay okay,” Fluttershy said awkwardly
> Comma after the first ‘okay’.
Instant Correction: [Note: Trying something new to make it easier to know the errors with these.]
Oh yeah, I almost forgot that you’re coming with us too.
Overconfidence is never a good thing, Rainbow Dash,” said Luna…
Fluttershy started to fly over towards the cat...
... “especially that Fluttershy one.
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Thanks; glad you're enjoying the story.:yay:

Man! You are one cruel bastard!
My father is in the room next to me and working. So I have to keep it down.
And you are writing so funny!!! I had to stop reading a few times or I'd have burst out in laughter more than once. :pinkiehappy:
Good to see a new chapter.

Dragon:moustache:

So much yay for this chapter and even more for the next one! :yay:

Dragon:moustache:

Seriously man, I laughed through the whole chapter!!! :rainbowkiss:
When Cream stated that she and Angel might be boyfriend and girlfriend and that she's most likely too young for that, I completely lost it. :rainbowlaugh:
And the scene where Cream spots the ponies and runs towards them? My mind went into overdrive and I imagined that Cream was running faster than Sonic because she was so happy to see them, with Amy still staying at the hill top, watching from the spot where Cream was moments ago to where she was now. All with her eyes nearly falling out of their sockets.
For a story which is still on hiatus this was an amazingly funny chapter my friend. :pinkiehappy:

Dragon:moustache:

Good chapter. How will the Sonic gang react when learn of the current threat.

Lovely. Just lovely. Now Cream can combine with Flutters and use a chao-hameha. How fucking badass and cool is that?!?!
Liked the chapter. Some serious action and we saw some of the team spirit they got.
Awaiting further releases.

Dragon:moustache:

holy shit:twilightoops: its freaking metal sonic the pony world is doomed...DOOMED

for how long because i don't want to wait:raritydespair:

Great chapter.:ajsmug:

I think I know who is the target of Pinkie Pie. It is Tails.
You use Sonic X elements so Cosmo is dead and poor Tails is sad. I'm not sure but I would love it if I'm right. I realy like Cosmo and Tails.

Heh, oh that Knuckles, always susceptible to praises and flirts.

As for this chapter as a whole, it is a nice break (especially for anyone who had enough of dark and/or depressing stories for a bit) from the main story, and I have to say that I enjoyed the Sonic Adventure-ish recap in the beginning. Bring back fond memories of the series.

C&Cs will be PM to you.

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"... and I have to say that I enjoyed the Sonic Adventure-ish recap in the beginning. Bring back fond memories of the series."

I actually wasn't even thinking about that, but you're right... it is kinda like that.
:moustache: I'm so clever.

I really hope silver and blaze appear in the story later on.

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I was actually thinking about putting one of them in, but right now it is uncertain.

How come one of them. It would be cool for twilight meet another princess from a different dimension and someone who came from the future.. Just some advice.

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I thought that myself, but it's a lot to think about along with what I already have planned for the story.
We'll see what the future holds.

It's almost like Cream and Flutters are interdimensional surrogate sisters! Sonic and Rainbow Dash are speed squared, Amy and Pinkie can cause chaos on their own (if a certain pink pony princess is also involved), then Tails and Twilight are just adorkable!

Heh, why am I not surprise the race ended in a tie. But, I got to admit, it was still an awesome race. I wonder what Rarity thought about the whole crabs situation, considering it is a thing with her online. Heheheh, poor Rarity, the crabs decided to get themselves some new playmates (even though I am sure she isn't complaining one bit, heh). Odd, though, that it was Angel who froze like that and not Fluttershy, it is usually the other way around (eh, must not have been a good day for the little rabbit).

But, now the trouble continued from where it left off...can't wait to see what will happen next~!

As for C&Cs, I am kinda taking a bit of a break from it (with the exception of some saved C&Cs that I need to get rid of)...been letting them swamped me, so I decided to rest from them. However, I'll let you have this one for free: during the whole chapter, you may have gotten the two forms of "it" swapped around. "It's" = it is/has, while "its" is the possessive form of "it". Just Ctrl-F the word "it" and switch most of them around (I think one might have actually been correct, so be careful of that one, if I remember right that is).

Metal Ponies?! :rainbowderp:

Keeps getting better and better.

Well, things just went downhill for the heroes...badly. Man, those things got to have a weakness.
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I made some C&Cs on the previous chapter, so expect to see it in your PM box. Sadly, I'm not going to do any more C&Cs at this point.

Most, if not all, of the "lets" and "its" should have been "let's" and "it's", what translate to "let us" and "it is/has". "Its" is the possessive form of "it", and "lets" stand for “allows” or “permits” (ex. "She finally lets me join in the games.").

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No problem, but thanks for what you gave me. I always wonder why I keep getting those words mixed up.
Glad you're enjoying the story by the way; plus there is a weakness. For the answer to this spoiler, check ch. 3

KILL THAT DICK-SUCKING, BALL LICKING TUMOR!!!

...oh and Eggman, too...

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Pretty Epic chapter. I realy like it.
But I have a question:
If the mind conrtol gems weaknes is what you pointed in ch. 3. , than shouldn't be Sonic and Shadow immun to the gems? They are walking containers for that energy.

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Just thought about that this morning,:facehoof: and you prove a good point.
But not to worry, I'm already working a way around it.:raritystarry:

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