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Burly Bubble


Just one of those people on the internet. /)

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Mystic Spark is a young colt gifted in magic and sarcasm. Unfortunately, he's also blind. Does this stop him from doing what he wants? Heck no! Except reading, but he doesn't need books to learn. He just need's a well-read teacher.
Note: I have seen Snowdrop, but that's not where this stemmed from. I watched the Book of Eli yesterday and the whole blind but able-to-do-everything ability fascinated me :I.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

This is probably the only non-Snowdrop related story I've read that has included a disabled pony. It'll be interesting to see how Twilight has to learn to accommodate Mystic's blindness while keeping up her own studies. I'm looking forward to reading more and encourage you to keep it up. I don't think there are enough serious explorations on disability in the MLP field.

*my thoughts before reading*
I dunno, this story looks interesting, but I'm worried that it'll just turn out to be another overly depressing fic about a colt who can't fit in....

"...watched the Book of Eli yesterday and the..."

Oh hell yes I'm reading this story! God I love Book of Eli.....don't dissapoint me! :P

3358194 Thanks, it helps to get good feedback. This was a oneshot, but getting decent results makes me want to write more of it.:pinkiehappy:

3358426 I'll do my best, but i'm still a noob at writing :twilightsheepish:

3362357 I haven't seen the Book of Eli at all, so I don't know how it compares to your work. I have seen Snowdrop and I'm seriously considering putting a disabled pony in one of my stories if I can write it well. I heartily encourage you to keep up the good work.

"Like a badly written novel."

Now now, don't be so hard on yourself :P
What you've got thus far is a little short for my taste but still enjoyable. I look forwards to any subsequent chapters.

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