• Member Since 28th Dec, 2013
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Nineveh


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Life has never really taken much of a toll on me. I've already gotten used to depressions and everything that life chooses to hit me with.

I've never believed in promises. Promises are never kept. I've never believed in sociability. In this world, you're always alone. I've never believed in pain. I'm too numb for anything.

Nothing can get worse than it already is.


Cover art by dreampaw on DeviantArt

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

Liking it so far... I'll be stalking this story like Skeeter on Lurking Steroids.

4211924 It's well deserved! I'm waiting to see more of this, it intrigues me. And getting an 'I like this' from me on the first chapter is quite a feat for most people, Literally can count the times I've said that with my fingers.

4211930 I'm honored; I hope not to disappoint with my update :twilightsheepish:

4211939
Wow, Nineveh. You touched my heart in more ways than one. First of all my parents divorced when I was two and even though its not as bad as what Dashie went through I can still remember the Christmas mornings of disappointments after the same terrible question'Where's daddy?' This forever made me resent my father when I realized he cheated on my mom. Eventually things got better when my mom married my step-father. The man who thought me to play DnD and how to ride a bike. So all I say is that from the lowest point in the world there is nowhere to go. But up. :twilightsmile:

4214632 That must've been more touching than my story

4214706
Thanks, really. Yes I may have a sad backstory but things are getting better. And really you mean that? I not a great writer or poet. Your more experienced, older and wiser than me. Your the Shakespeare to my Dr. Seuss. Just a few words I come up with is nothing compared to a complex storyline. But if it is good do you think I have a chance in a writing contest at school?

4214729 With a bit of touch-ups and refining, then yeah :twilightsmile:

4214743
Oh, Luna talking has stirred up some bad memories. Any who, thanks Ill try to win!! :mustache:

the feels :applecry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::fluttershysad::raritydespair::raritycry:
amazing story I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT :heart::heart::heart::heart:
keep up the good work :twilightsmile:
btw when is chapter 3 out :duck:

4667629 Yeah, about that... I am technically on hiatus, though the status may say otherwise.
I'm currently on a long vacation, so I'll not be able to write for a while. My most sincere apologies, Madame

okie-dokie-lokie:pinkiehappy:
and don't worrie I understand oh and have fun on your vacasion :pinkiesmile:
keep up the awesome work :pinkiehappy:
and rember keep smiling :pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::twilightsheepish::raritystarry::derpytongue2:

Omg I almost cried!!
This is awesome!!
When you write more ?

4860594 Well, I'm actually on the verge of retiring from the world of literature, as I've somehow moved on to the world of artistry. Though, I may dedicate some time to writing when I can :)

OMG I Almost cried when it mentioned what happened to Soarin but when it mentioned the necklace, I broke. I literally had to stop reading for a sec because of how hard I was crying...scratch that, I meant "sobbing ". A story this real and that can get someone to cry must be a good story:pinkiesad2:. WOW I'VE NEVER BEEN THAT SERIOUS FOR THAT LONG :rainbowlaugh:

Oh good lord. What description can do to a person’s emotions. That was hard to read.

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