All Spike wanted was a fun, relaxing, and possibly romantic Nightmare Night. So how did he wind up in the middle of Canterlot, stuck between an overbearing Twilight, hyper Cutie Mark Crusaders, and a desperate Princess Luna? To make matters worse, all this candy is starting to give his greedy side one hell of a sweet tooth...
Oh this is going to be fun.
By god, you're alive! Huzzah! Instant track.
Welcome back.
Hm, thid sounds good, I'll keep an eye on it
Interesting!
Go on!
I love how you set up and executed everything to get these character arranged the way they will be, even if the plot really strains itself to do so. Inviting her whole freakin' country to migrate to one place is actually an incredibly cumbersome idea on Luna's part. It would've been more expedient (though less personal) to make a flyby over each city and settlement, casting a spell down on them all to make harmless ghosts, ghouls, boogeymares, and other illusions spring up and pretend to chase the inhabitants around. Stilted though it is, I like the direction.
Hmmm? You're actually still here? I thought you'd left or something, with how long your other stories haven't received updates. Oh well, good to see you're still here.
Oh my yes! Please tell me you still have plans for Alduin Unbound, if not then cancel it and put us out of our misery!
Spike didn't stand an chance against them. Good job and hope to see more soon!
That...was the best line...ever. Of all time.
Luna is so screwed when either Spike, Rarity, or Twilight get their hands on her.
Where did you get the story image?
Banging around on top of the train?
Will Tiberius be there?
Were I Spike, I would give Luna a tongue-lashing, then tell her that I'll be going down to the train station to wait for its arrival, and only until after my company sets hoof on the platform will I be available to her. That was all unnecessarily rude.
I don't understand why this must be anthro, though. While reading, I'm constantly picturing the canon characters, and it all fits comfortably in my mind; but then the word "hands" or something rears its ugly head and throws me off. Far as I can tell, it adds absolutely nothing.
Promise me that Tiberius will be there.
Dude plz finish "The Twisted Pony" thanks
Is it tomorrow yet?
oh boy
Is this story cancelled where is the next part?
I think fimfiction has a huge problem instead of it being a place full of great stories about mlp being made instead it is now a graveyard of great stories and users we will probably never see again
So yeah once a use becomes inactive for a long time it is sad to assume there fim fiction is dead and there fim fiction account
Damn, I am new to this site and everytime I see an author or good story that I have enjoy, they disappear from the site.
But you didn't dry the dogs
They are so sons o' bitch!
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