Stranded in an unknown world and in a new body, Ben must try and start a new life while dealing with the crises that happen every week.
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Suicidal Ben? That's a first for me, what stories have you been reading?
Ponyville or Canterlot is my decision.
Not going to lie I skipped the prologue, it seems like everything in that chapter is when he was in Alien Force so I don't know whats going on when its references that series. for a 5k chapter, it felt really slow (for me) mostly because it is talking about characters that I don't know how they look, act, or their history with one another and I was pretty lost. never really like that version of ben in alien force he felt far more generic so never really watched it, and even less of the other 2 ben 10 shows.
But wouldn't there be two large concentrations of sentient life high above sea level? one of them would be cloudsdale and the other canterlot base on how dramatic the mountains come up I would say its about one mile from sea level. but compare to ware ben is at it may not be that high up to his current location.
Where do you think Ben should go? well... you never gave distance so I would pick whatever is the closest one to him.
you never said ware ben was at but it would have to be some ware between the crystal empire and cloudsdale. And sents he's not in snow (Because I think you would put that in) the crystal empire would be far too far of a travel to go by himself with zero to no knowledge. and if he can somehow fly without scaring the ponies he could go to cloudsdale but I don't think he has a flying alien he could change into without scaring everyone, so he would have to go to Canterlot.
Why not just make him into a changeling instead of a pony?
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I thought changelings could only change appearance and not abilities?
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Changeling magic can copy one abilities
Not to mention it could help him whenever the device times out?
He should head to the one that is to the south on the ground
Something that I'm curious about there was two clones that got sent into the portal what happened to the other one and which one is this 4 or 5
Heading South is as good an idea as heading north. Except that if we head north, it will more than likely lead to a lot of snow. On the plus side, we might get to see Heat Blast again if we head north.
i can't wait for the next chapter
I think Ponyville. But that's just me thinking.
Poniville and please update.
When are you going to update?
This is a well done
He should go to the changeling hive, If It is an option
It's obvious it's Ponyville is where Ben should go. Most of the action is there anyway. Plus... I think a certain purple pony princess will be very interested in the Omnitrix and Asmuth.
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