Scootaloo, starts talking to Fluttershy about her dreams. Fluttershy remembers something from her past that might let Scootaloo live her dreams, if only for a while, but, it hinges on Rainbow Dash's help.
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Awwww yup
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I tried to make something sweet, and that sounded like it could be canon. I think I succeeded
This was certainly very sweet, and mechanically, I didn't see anything wrong with it. I do think this story has some pacing issues, however. The ending feels very rushed compared to the rest of it, and ends too abruptly. I think the story needed to continue for a little longer to let the audience appreciate what's going on.