The Nurse Who Loved Me

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AndyHunter

AndyHunter #1 · 2 weeks ago · 1 · ·

Forget to leave this comment, for those who are interested in an arc removed from the story. It's about that years after Redheart gave birth to her filly, her relationship with Blaze was strained because Blaze had forgotten to feed the filly because he went skateboarding and lost track of time (he usually forgets many things), and when Redheart found out about this, she got very angry and told Blaze to get out of the house; she even threw the skateboard at Blaze.

Blaze felt devastated and alone, and there was a fully detailed scene where he had sex with other mares, but it wasn't all that satisfying to him because he still loved Redheart.

I had in mind to end the story here or make a sequel. The story was becoming too long; it was reaching 12k words. I wanted the arc to not be so long, but strained relationships and infidelity are complex topics that I don't think are able to develop in such a short time. It felt "rushed," at least to me. Also, I don't think it would have been a good idea for people to read this, Redheart and Blaze having happy sex, and then I give you dark moments; it felt unnecessary. I better use that idea in another story.

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