When he woke up, he never would expect to still be alive, never would he experience the warmness in his heart, will he further release the emotions he has locked up inside himself. Or will he repeat the same mistake his brought upon himself?
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Its okay just take your time and always check your work with them fonts
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thanks, And about the fonts, I think its FIM's HTML style? I tried editing them, and it doesnt change, even some of the Spacings, weird
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Yeah it's weird but it takes some getting use to.
And by the way you doing Nelo? Because of its Vergil its Nelo
(Sorry for nitpicking DMC fan here :3)
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dun worry dude, Im a fan also, and yep, Nelo/Nero angelo is vergil right? he'll be keeping his name, at bay for the moment
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Okay, good to see the Vergil(Dark Angel, Gliver etc) again:)
Two exclamation points is improper.
One is proper. And try adding more question marks, seeing as most of Twilight's dialogue comprises of not so intricate questions, lack of surprise, lack of wanting to know more, and lack of question marks. Please. These are rookie mistakes.
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for I am a rookie,
even still, I think you guys already know that English ain't exactly my first language, which is no excuse by the way.
A gladly thank you for the feedback, much appreciated
2915981 Ah. I see, I do indeed know that it is hard to change from one language to another. You are very good for someone who's English is their second language. And, I must request more.
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thanks, I do soak up the feedbacks people give, so if you guys ever see any errors, dont be shy and tell it straight to my face lol. I'll try to release one per day. thanks again
It's 4:00 AM. New day, new chapter right?
This not considered a new day?
But whyyy
This is sparta, blah blah blah. Now no-one can make that annoying joke.
He should give the shotgun to Luna
*sigh* I told you
Is infact
NOT in quotations.
I wonder how Vergil will kill Discord now...
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I never thought of Sparda as the type of guy to say "Lets get this party started". But then again, Dante must've gotten it from somewhere..
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well if you look at the devilmaycry wiki, you'll see that Sparda was as rawdy as dante and as cool and composed as vergil, he's like the combination of the two brothers
That's a great idea!!! Doitdoitdoitdoit!!!!!
Oh a devil may cry story with virgil this going to be. Good
Are you kidding its virgil this is great. Oh and twi reaserchering tarterus thats going to come in handy when she meets a real devil
Well the shit's about to hit the fan.
Fiiiinally! A story with Vergil as the protagonist...I have been searching for one like this for evvvveeer!
I'm going to really enjoy this, I'm sure of it!
Never played any of the DMC games but even with that i gotta say that i really like this story. Hoping for more.
and that kiddies is why YOU DO.NOT.PLAY.WITH.GUNS!!! indoors.
I can not wait to hear vergil's reaction to all of this i mean he and dante are practilly related to princess celestia and luna!
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My vote is beheading
Deberian de continuar esta historia es buena!
I loved that part where Spike interacted with Nero Angelo/Vergil about the "might controls everything" bit.
Wonder what you got planned for Spike later on?
Wished this story would be able to continue more.
Wished this story would have continued.
It was pretty good.
hehe costume time