Flash Sentry visits Twilight while on vacation in Ponyville for a week. Will Twilight take chance on Flash or will she let him go?
Name's Annabelle, Annabelle Rose the Hedgehog, but you can call me Annie. I write as a hobby and have a policy to finish what I started.
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Welcome to the fandom! It is a great one, and I am sure you will enjoy it. You did pretty good for a first timer, especially one who is new to the fandom. I gave you a thumbs up. Good luck in the future, keep on writing.
I think it great also I don't mind the OOC just dial it down a little.
I bet her friends are going to start the teasing about Twilight's crush.
I enjoyed reading this. Smiled imagining this happening while reading.
What OOC? I practically read it all in Tara Stong's voice AND kept reminding myself that this was in the ponyverse NOT the Equestria Girls world.
Really great work for a new comer!! Can't wait for more!
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It was just a conern since I'm not used to writing for this fandum. But after watching Equestria Girls I knew I had to do something for this shipping, so this is the result.
Thanks for the compliment though. I feel a lot better now with this one.
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Thanks, you know, I think I might like it here.
well i will say welcome to fimfiction even if im late a little.
Thanks.
Maybe her wings sprung up when she saw, heard, or think of Flash Sentry.
Awwwww... They're connecting!!!
There's one thing Flash Sentry needs to do before asking out Twilight Sparkle: get pass B.B.B.F.F.
3047100: ? I don't get it
3056756: They were connecting since the MLP FiM's first movie, didja knew?
3088025Yes I did... I was speaking on terms of the fanfiction. Plus they connected the the humanverse. Not so much in the ponyverse.
Saw that coming.
Nice chapter. I was wondering when this story would update. I can't wait to read how their date went.
Any advice? I'm having a bit of trouble making it work out in my head.
1,000,000 bits say Twilight's friends and sister-in-law will spying on her date with Flash Sentry which by the way made his cameo on "Three's a Crowd".
3862285 That actually didn't come to mind. Maybe I'll use it. Thanks.
3860193 Yeah, it's coming slowly, but still coming. Thanks by the way.
Whens the next chapter coming out??
A FlashLight story I haven't seen yet? Well, time to read again!
Thanks for the update. I really enjoy this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I know how to get Twilight's wings erected.
This is a good story so far. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the update. I liked that mature conversation between Flash and Shinning. I really think you did a great thing right there. Good luck with future chapters and don't keep us waiting too long.
I LOVE this story can't wait for more
Nice chapter. I think it was a good one. Good luck with the next one. I can't wait to read about the date.
I am definitely loving this story. Can't wait to see how it goes!
Great chapter. I enjoyed it. I can't wait for the actual date. I don't know if I want it to be romantic, tragic comedic, or just awkward. Which do you like?
4743419 I'm not entirely sure. I just go with what comes to me and there a different paths with each scenario that I can take. It depends on what I think I can make work and flow. I'm still working on it.
I do think it'll be cute though.
4746431 That good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck.
Nice chapter. I think you did a great job. Good luck with writing the next chapter.
What kind of guitar, Spanish guitar?
Why do I see a snogging in the future?
Nice chapter. I think you did a great job. Good luck writing about the picnic date.
4925838 It's not like they'll be all over each other... still just the first date
Flash likes war books too?! AWESOME!
Flash loves history too! I'm also really big when it comes to details about soldiers and weapons.
Spike being Spike.
That was a nice chapter. Good luck with future chapters. Thanks for the warm fuzzy feelings.
oiy vey, good luck Flash you're gonna need it.
"I can always make room"
I think Tirek heard that line before he blew the library to Kingdom Come.
Flash got off easy with shining armor. When I first started dating my wife back in 1989, her brother threatened to rip out my throat (until he found out I recently enlisted in the usaf).
Thanks for the update. I like this and I like the thought each put into eachother's gift. Thanks for a warm fuzzy chapter.
I LUV IT !!!!!!
YES, WHAT WOULD THE BBBFF DO. THROW HIM OUT THE WINDOW , IN FRONT OF A TRAIN.... OR JUST CALMLY ACCEPT IT? WE CAN ONLY WONDER.......
GOOD LUCK, SURVIVE THE BBBFF
SAME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'M GOING TO CRY BECAUSE OF THAT LETTER AS WELL
Sweet. Thanks for the update. I love how Cadence is medding and she isn't being caught. I love this story. Thanks.