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You are the Immortal Hero. A legendary hero who's exploits have yet to be witnessed. The lives that you will live through will be tragic, but this is a job you're honor bound to perform and complete until the end of time. You will defeat great monsters, challenge gods, and ultimately save life as we know it. Every hero has a beginning and it's time to begin yours.
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Hmmm, not a bad start; though it feels a little rushed.
Ohhh I'm so bad at choices...
Legak sounds AWESOME
former apprentice
My vote is for Legak he sounds very interesting.
Yep, Legak it is.
I'll go with Aetherraent
Aetherraent
Legak
Legak
Atherraent
second guy :P
Legak
Legak.
For some reason Legak is reminding me of Legolas, so I'm picking him.
Atherraent.
Atherraent
i don't know why but Volt told me to say this Atherraent
Aetherraent
3206413 Me too.
3206441 lol
3206441 so how have you been
oh aswell the story is great
3206454 Good, it would probably be better to talk like this in my comments section not some other storie's.
3206493 trying to get more people to read your story
3206529 Thanks, though shameless advertisement never ends well
3206547so doesn't stop me
3206556 Alright then.
3206562 blackdragons story the last human is preaty good
Aetherraent.
Aetherraent
I like the idea of legak it sounds like more could be done with this choice
and the lost memories should be more entertaing to deal with
Voting for Legak.
I think you could get the best point of view from a story from the (Neutral) standing point than any other.
I like the first a ton but the third looks badass. Albeit i would make luna prefer him slightly as he is badass.
I vote third personality!!(go insane instincts only man!!)
The Gray Orb.
grey orb
Voting for the Black Orb.
grey, celestia always come across to me as 'to good' there is not enough backstorie in my opionion, luna though I can see you getting close to here
Grey orb.
Black orb, I mean who doesn't want to be an insane badass!?
The gray orb
neutrality is a burden and a blessing in it own rights. hopefully grey orb will give us an unpredictable surprises to us but i do wish grey had a little of all three of the personality mix to add a little flare to liven it up like surprises but that be like discord.
black orb sound fun but likely a pain for being misunderstood but readers like that a lot who could resist the possible fun and hidden sad side but it depressing and annoying if he to impulsive and rash.
grey give us a neutral view of the story but here hoping he not a bore for being a hidden person
white orb is literally at this kind of story will never be pick since people will want either black or grey orb no sentient is truly perfect and white knight while nice just is not the kind of drama people look for to serious and boring nice good.
I choose the black orb.
3212155 The White Orb-plays at the theme that the character tries to do as much good as he possibly can, much like a white knight, but cannot since he will have to cope with the realization that he cannot save everyone and that no matter how much good he does, bad things will always happen that will be out of his control. He is perfectly willing to choose to the more morally wrong choices if he see's fit, but will usually have to be pushed over the moral event horizon.
The Grey orb plays at the theme that the character doesn't have to always do for other people, he can do for himself as well. Instead of always choosing the morally good options he will also choose the morally bad choices if it means he'll save more lives. He'll be a man of peace that has suffered from much pain in his life, and is slowly starting to take on the stress of being immortal. but I will consider mixing up the neutral personality, as you say it'll liven him up.
And the Black orb plays at the theme that being dark is not evil is not evil. He is perfectly fine with doing bad things if he see's that it will help him in the long run, it's just that he does it more times than others. Like the Grey orb he often tends to think about himself and not about others, while he saved the day he didn't do it in the way that would most likely be beneficial for everyone and will often be ridiculed for it. Like you said he'll have to live with being often misunderstood for his actions.
grey
Black
Black orb
Black
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Touché...
I like how Aetherrant pulled a Cheshire Cat on Fenris.
good so far, but you need a proofreader or an editor