Now that all of the girls have reunited after the events of the Fall Formal, it's time to party! And what better occasion than a costume party for Halloween? Pinkie Pie is hosting the shindig and Rarity offers to make costumes for each of her friends. What costume will each of the girls choose and will Rarity be able to pull off making all of them in time? What about their newest friend, Sunset Shimmer? Will the party be a nightmare night or a chance for old and new friends to share a laugh?
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Good story!
Looking forward to seeing more! You now have a new follower.
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Thanks, and I'm flattered. :)
I LOVE IT, LOVE LOVE LOVE !! LOVE !!
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Thanks a lot !
Very cute
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Thanks :) It was fun to write :)
Luvvit!!
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Awww thanks
bra jobbat! :) (good work)
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Tak! (I think!)
3301503 haha!! :D almost it's ''tack'' but close enough
and tak means roof actually!
Ah man, I can't believe you fell for that, Sunset.
Another good story!
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Rarity is soooo in for it.
Thanks :)
An enjoyable, fun little story. Thank you for it.
I liked this. It made me smile. Sometimes that's all I want from a story. Thanks for this.
Fluttershy is best pirate
And hmm...what was Applejack planning?
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Glad you enjoyed it :)
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Aww thanks, glad you liked it :)
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If I can ever bring myself to write a shipping story, maybe we'll all find out
I love your Equestria Girls stories. You shall be my second follow so that I can watch for more.
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Thank you so very much! I am glad you are enjoying them :)
Fluttershy rules Discord drools
Feo review! I'll do this for the whole series, since this one's a little fluffy for a whole review.
The good:
Simple but effective characterization. You don't throw a lot of curveballs, and you don't radically change the characters, but you credibly explore how they would interact with each other, and there are hints that those interactions may be changing. It's fun to watch.
Planned-out plotting. You're developing elements piece by piece that may not pay off for quite a while, and although I'm not sure exactly where this will go, you definitely know what you're doing.
The bad:
Language may be too clear and straightforward. I don't want to press this too hard, because you're a beginning writer--clarity is a good starting point for a new writer, and attempts to find beauty in the words can be overdone and lead to confusion. Still, I tend to find myself skimming the description and exposition in these stories to get to the parts that feel interesting.
The verdict:
You're starting where a beginning writer should start, taking interesting characters and matter-of-factly telling their stories. It would be a good idea to slowly work on flow and rhythm, trying to find more interesting ways to describe situations and characters, but don't go overboard with it--it would be counterproductive to obscure what you already have. For now, thumbs up!
Oh dear goodness, Applejack, just what do you have in mind?
Well, that was fun! It was nice to see the ice between Sunset and the others broken a bit further, and the costumes were all fun. Flutterpirate should be a thing.
omg that "Close enough" bit made me laugh a little too hard. good stuff, I'm glad Rarity got her revenge and they can put it behind them now
... but I'd be interested in a prank war 
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I focused on that at first, but then I saw...
EqG Tag.
This was cute and nice. I absolutely loved the bit with Rarity's plan for Sunset's costume.
Even when I figured out what was going to happen, the moment of seeing it was still quite entertaining. XD
This, this was funny and totally in character for Rainbow Dash. Nice job!
Hilarious
Note to self never mention goodwill to Rairty.
Damn I'm rainbow you just had to.
lol a good way to get back at her.
Say what now
https://m.Huh never thought she'd want to be that.
Yep she fits it perfectly
You get used to it after awhile.
You've got to be kidding me, out of all the costumes she should dress up as she think sunset should be a clown, I have so many questions why though since I don't think she'd make the picture.
Don't have to remind me twice.
Well that answers the question why she thought Sunset should be that, noted.