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Hayseed Turnip Truck is having a wild day. He is let go from one job in the morning, hired again that afternoon, and finds himself working with his long time crush Vinyl Scratch. He does all that he can to help Vinyl as she suffers a series of odd events herself. His co-workers find out about his feelings for her and encourage him to tell her. However, things don't go exactly as planned.
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Random you know you are asking for at least some fanrage by not just paring Vinyl up with another pony but also with a stallion. *grins* Can't wait to read it
YES! Another great Random_User crack ship fic.
Well... a very interesting start
Vinyl being shipped with somepony who's not Octavia? I REFUSE TO READ THIS!
Another rare find, a Vinyl fic where she isn't shipped with Octavia.
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3393189>>3393072 Good to see you again! You know me, I'm always stirring up trouble of some kind. I have found I love crack shiping, just asks my friend alexanderhunt 88. By the way, is "a interesting start" a good thing or a bad thing?
3393119 I'm glad you like it. It took me a bit to come up with a scenario for the two of them, but when I did, it took off all on it's own.
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A good thing, and you know my stance about sticking it to the fandom
3394502 The cracker (if that's a word) the ship, the harder the scenario.
Holy jumpin' bananas! This was kind of short, but super sweet!
Nice story, as always.
*grins and applauds* Very cute fun. A lot of typos though so I suggest trying the editing groups to lend some help on those.
3402396 Thanks! The characters were a little difficult to get to ship, but when it all started to pull together, it was a heck of a ride. It's not one of my heavier shipping stories so I'm glad you liked it.
On another note:
Good gravy! The typos! Typos everywhere! That's what I get for writing after a long day, and being half sleep deprived. I'm going back through and catching what I can. I'll have to get involved with an editing group. I'm just not that skilled at catching my own errors. Is there a group you would recommend?
3400431 Thank you! It's a lighter ship fic than what I usually do, but it was fun to write.
3406994 oh jeez, um, The editor's group was pretty good when I was part of it. I've sort of filled my plate with authors and writers so I've left the group ^^; I kept feeling guilty that there would be folks seeing editors and I couldn't help.
Very good story. There were quite a few grammatical errors but it was still worth the read.
3402396>>3410667 I went back and pounded the heck out of my grammar. Most of my errors seemed to stem from dialog punctuation, which of course the grammar checker I have does not check for.
Thank you for helping me improve my stories. Without getting feedback that I'm doing something wrong, I would never be able to improve. I appreciate you taking the time to comment on how I can fix my writing.
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Anytime. I love giving opinions because they help and make stories I enjoy even better when I decide to look back on them.
3428233 It's worth it because it's easy to see how much work you put into this fic
Awesome story!
There is only one glaring error I saw....
it's marked 'complete' XD
A pleasant read, I enjoyed the entire story
5301051 Thank you. The inspiration came from the Crack Shipping group's story prompts. I have not done one of those in a while, but I hope to soon.
Good to know I'm not the only one who DOESN'T ship Vinyl and Octavia. Nothing against people who do, I just see them as sisters. Same goes with Lyra and Bon Bon.
If you think you're not good enough for someone, ask yourself "Maybe I'm not just the one to make them happy, maybe they're the one who will make me happy?"
Well that was pretty nice of the boss
Another underrated character hayseed turnip who kind of disappeared and also a very interesting shipping as well so it looks like turnip is in trouble because he's been let go of his job but apparently this Pony gave a card that there is another place that can hire him which turn out to be a club and it turns out everybody was pretty nice of him to let him in and he's pretty good of fixing up Electronics he even bumped into an old friend Vinyl Scratch which she's pretty happy to see him and it's pretty interesting how the other workers helping him to build his confidence and everything and after the Club everybody went home but unfortunately vinyl room has been taken and now there is no other available hotels but hayseed turnip invited her to stay with him which Vinyl Scratch happily accepted and I got to say he is a pretty nice guy well let's see how the other day will go
She told Shaker, “I’ll Pinkie Promise, to make it binding.” Vinyl said her oath, and completed the full motions to seal the Pinkie Promise.
Shaker looked at her, as if the deejay had lost her mind. “What the hay was that?”
“I’ll tell you later, it’s a bit of a long story.”
I guess outside of Ponyville nobody doesn't know the Pinkie Pie's promise
Oh wow this was a pretty cute story and a very interesting shipping again so it looks like turnip is starting to feel something for vinyl but he felt like he was not worth it but luckily some of the workers think he should give him some credit here and how much they appreciate him and it looks like vinyl is in trouble especially with having gigs so turnip decided to help out without Vinyl Scratch noticing it with a little help on the others but of course she figure it out as much she was pretty upset she was very thankful for him to do this and it also admitted how much she cared about him as well and that's pretty cute this is a pretty nice story keep up the good work