Flagged for full re-write.
2000 years after her death, Twilight Sparkle is revived to find herself in A crippling Equestria where a force known as the darkness is attempting to take over the land. The land was brought into a golden age by an unknown Sphere known as the traveler that replaced the lost Alicorns. But it also brought the Darkness with it. Revived by a ghost, she is claimed to be one of many that protect the land. A Warlock. A guardian.
Second story in sci-fi series
Note, Twilight was never Alicorn. Reason for A.U Tag
5080892 Next chapter may give you feels. Not at the tower yet.
I feel like she wouldn't be so comfortable takinga life, no natter how hostile it may be.
This story could have had much more character growth if you'd adressed that.
I also notice that you don't use commas where you probably should.
If you want any more tips, my PM is always an option.
5082383 That takes up many questions. Would she be comfortable killing the vex? A lot has changed since her death.