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Soarin decides to show his affection for Rainbow Dash by giving her a pie. But is it worth the troubles and pains? Soarin travels all over Cloudsdale bakeries for the pie, but something always seems to go wrong, and he ends up leaving empty hoofed. Rainbow is leaving Cloudsdale the next day. Will Soarin find the pie in time?
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When he said that I was like 'a pie, that's it! There's only just one way, to win rainbows heart at best'
6039535 , lol.
I loved it!
Update?
Amzingnesssesesesenesses!
Found one typo: Should be Cloudsdale
6043419 , I have another story I'm working on, but I will try to update.
6049681 , mines gramarrs gooder than is youses.
6051335 *face hoof*
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6077150 , OK, thanks for the tips!
Poor Soarin' lost his pie
Too bad RD isn't there to catch it this time.
Great job. I love this- and yes, Cloudsdale Pie Club Rules. Maybe if it catches on, AJ can start one in Ponyville? lol
Can't wait for the next chapter!
This is gonna be good
6092930 , Thanks!
6094995 , eeeeyup.
I bet everypony will be staring at him like
I would have read it earlier, but for some reason it didn't appear in my feed til now 
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Sheesh dude, you do realise that she leaves tommorow, right
Anyways good chapter
This chapter didn't appear in my feed. I was lucky that I saw it during my search in Soarin tag stories. And I was really lucky. This chapter was so AWESOME!
This Story is AMAZING. OMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSH. I will track this story down and read
It every single day!!!!
LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH
6099907 , lol.
6102304 , thanks!
6111235 , Thanks u!
6111244 , sorry, but new chapters mosrt likely won't be coming out soon.
This is so not your day Soarin XD
This chapter surprised me a bit. I wouldn't expect the bullies to treat Soarin that way!
I mean, they DO know he's a Wonderbolt, right?
Anyway, great job. I feel soooo bad for Soarin. The guy really needs to be cut some slack. He's gonna be broke pretty soon if this keeps up.
I can't wait to see what troubles befall him next. XP
Good luck!
6318139 , Eeeyup.
6318411 , it was a bit rushed. The bullies seem to have simple minds, so I guess they were in food mode. As for disasters, I do have some ideas......
6318902 Uh oh, should I be worried for Soarin's safety?
6319112 , (read in an ominous voice) of course not my dear......
6039535 Don't forget cherry that should be considered, then we'll know for sure which flavours the winner something that's awesome and cool just like her
Where do I apply for pie club?
NOOOOOOOoOoooOOOOOOOOO00000000000000°°°°°°@@@@@@@@@ MOAR
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i was already into the story on the first paragraph. PIE! I LOVE PIE! Pumpkin? Apple? Cherry? Pear? lemon? Key lime? Lemon and key lime? I LOVE THEM ALL! never one have i disliked pie!
P.S. I also like pecan and peanut butter, and...etc
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!! PIE! PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE!
Sorry, *Calms self* usually i am not like this, but your story has lit a fire in my soul.......PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE PIE.........
omyomyomyomyomyomyomyomyomy!!!!!!!!!!! O MY BLUEBERRY PIE! I WILL MURDER THEM! POOR SOARIN! (Although it would be delicious)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
6525256 , thanks!
my soul urges you to make more chapters!
please? *big eyes*
6675261 , *tries super hard to resist big eyes* I'm starting another story right now, but I will update after that.
6680985 oh thank you!
I think he forgot a minor detail. Rainbow dash doesn't like any types of pies