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Arcelia


A 25 year old aspiring fanfiction writer, cosplayer and partner of Cerulean Voice

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Rainbow Dash has just had the worst day of her life. She was fired from her job and failed the Wonderbolts entry exam. With her lifelong dream forever ruined and the stability of her future on the line, she finds herself on the brink of despair. Yet there is still something much more important that she needs to remember.

A tie-in with Pie In the Sky

Edited by Vertigo-01

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Comments ( 10 )

Well, I guess the ponies living in that city literally had to get out of Dodge.

Well worth the wait. Dash's reason for flunking the test was quite interesting. Though, given what we've seen of the Wonderbolts, I have to wonder if Rainbow would have found it possible to be both a Wonderbolt and remain close to her friends.

A neat little message from Twilight there. :twilightsmile:

I swear I get the fuzzies whenever I read something by you. It's uncanny.

Now, about Dodge City...

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Thank you Adren, I've been dying to hear your thoughts on at least one of my stories for ages. Its good to finally hear from you at last. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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It is possible that Rainbow Dash could become a Wonderbolt and still stay close to the mane six, perhaps such a question could inspire you to write a piece on such a topic?
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I wouldn't be so sure about that, but writing a spin-off story about what really happened at Dodge City wouldn't be a bad idea...

6615298 I could... but I've seen several stories like that. And, to be honest, Rainbow isn't my favorite character to write.

Eh...
This was a sweet enough story, but unfortunately I read it at the wrong time.

At the time of this comment, Newbie Dash has been out for close to 2 weeks. And that episode showed that, indeed, RD could be both part of the Wonderbolts AND stay close to her friends.

On top of that, it doesn't have the alternate universe tag, which it really should, considering the differences between what happened in this story and what had actually happened in the show.

So while it IS a well written story, I can't really favorite it.

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If you would like I can put the alternate universe tag on it, I'm sorry you can't favorite it. But I'm still glad you enjoyed it anyway. :twilightsheepish:

7233709 Putting the AU tag on it WOULD be a good idea.

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I've managed the changes accordingly. Thank you for your feedback. :raritywink:

7233866 You're welcome.

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