Tired of their rivalry and hatred for one another in Canterlot High, Adagio and Sunset's mothers force them to have a sleepover.
"I should stuff your face in cookie dough and make cute cookies!"
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What if they made out the instant their moms come home?
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6558481 they could say that they truly bonded
Hmm...from a reader's standpoint, it's pretty good, but unfortunately, I'm a writer, and I can't overlook a few things.
1.) Fix up the grammar a bit. Not too many people know how to properly punctuate, it seems.
2.) Don't rush it. It's a good story, but it could do with a bit more volume, perhaps?
But, as a whole, I give it four stars out of five. Good job there.
"I know that!"
Sunset: Hey Adagio, want to go beat up on Trixie?
Adagio: I thought you'd never ask.
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sunset's mother: I think the plan worked really well.
adagio's mother: now how are we going to explain to them that we wanted them to get along, because we're dating?