College Student. Writer. Asperger's Syndrome. Christian. Aspiring Voice Actor.
When Sora ends up on a completely different world, he discovers that he has no memory of who he is except for his name. Throughout his journey to retrieve them, he will make friends, make enemies, and even attend school, but time is not on his side. If he doesn't unravel the mystery behind his missing memories, he will be too late to stop a threat on this world only someone like him can stop.
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Some grammar errors I noticed:
He tried to think long and hard about who exactly he was, anything that could help him out. Who was he and why was he here? So far, his attempts to regain his memories were unsuccessful. Trying to remember a piece of his past was like sifting through darkness while searching for a door to open.
As Sora continued his walk towards the house, he stopped when he noticed a red apple ripe and ready for eating. His mouth began to water at the mere thought of devouring the fruit. He had no idea how long it had been since he ate last, but given the reaction he had to an apple, it was probably a long time ago.
Sora’s eyes widened, the situation finally taking hold. He was almost shot by an elderly, southern-accented woman for trespassing and stealing an apple. Was he in a place where trespassing was punishable by death, or did he stumble across a crazy person’s house?
Definitely crazy. Sora inferred, deciding to surrender before she decided to take another shot and actually kill him. “Wait, don’t shoot! I swear I’m unarmed.”
I see a lot of potential in this story. Granted I am not a HUGE fan of kingdom hearts, I enjoy this.
Keep it up!
-Critics, Earth & Equestria: Loxartpokemon
Why must beautiful stories go unnoticed?
Ok, this seems like an interesting take on KH. Hope to see more of this story.
Hmm not a bad first chapter. But If this takes place during chain of memories like I think it does I think you could have put in an actual hint like:
“The only thing I had on me was a weird card. it didn't have any kind of writing on it but I knew what it said, or rather what it meant...Canterlot High."
Because the whole amnesia thing is to blatant and obvious. And if it's a different game like 1, 2, or 3D you didn't really leave any hints to that.
By the way love kingdom hearts it's my favorite game franchise
I like it i think it has really good potential. I will be watching out for more updates in the future,
P.S. I love kingdom hearts it was one of my favorite playstation 2 games.
This is looking good, hope to read more.
Nice chapter. Still, I have to verify something. Is Richard in the pony universe while Sora is stuck in a humanized MLP universe? Also, is the story going to shift between Sora and Richard as protagonists?
6717486 Probably should've mentioned that in the author's note, but yes to both questions.
it is the Icon in between You Tube and Spoiler it is called quote.