A pony wakes up in a strange room chained to a bed, with a princess who needs his help.
An entry into the Nightmare Night in April: Horror Write-Off contest.
Pre-read by UV Unicorn Laser and Regidar.
Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.
A pony wakes up in a strange room chained to a bed, with a princess who needs his help.
An entry into the Nightmare Night in April: Horror Write-Off contest.
Pre-read by UV Unicorn Laser and Regidar.
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Holy flaming horse apples!
That was great!
Absolutely stellar, you held my interest in the romance while stringing along the undertones at the plot’s heart (as it were)
dexter Rarity when
Mmm
And this is why it's fundamentally unethical to ship Raritwi.
I kid, I kid. Excellent tale of love driving someone to desperation. Best of luck in the judging!
Fascinating. I am both horrified, and extremely pleased.
"Willing to turn partner into a vampire to cheat death without consent" is a red flag.
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It's not true love unless you're willing to deprive your partner of their bodily autonomy and brainwash them into murdering people.
Ah, such a dreamy romance. Clearly a healthy and wonderful relationship.
Great story, thank you for writing it.
This was interesting! I liked the general voice of the narration, especially the first paragraph--that moment of hypothesis-induced obliviousness was a great way to make Twilight feel like herself even with everything else that was going on here.
But what I think I liked most is how the story pushed aside the less interesting part--Twilight having a pony strapped down in a room somewhere--for the more interesting part--why Twilight's doing it in the first place.
Thanks for writing, this was a nice read
Good stuff, the narration choice is a little jarring (I'm not used to dialogue without quotation marks) but it fits the tone you were going for excellently.
Hi, this was reviewed here! Thanks for picking me as a reviewer and I hope you find what I had to say helpful. Deuces!