So there I am, suddenly existing, not remembering a thing about who I was before. Fortunately I didn't loose all of my memories, just the ones that were personal. Context of my remaining memories suggests I was this thing called a human, but now I'm just an imperial pegasus in a world sorta similar to a TV show I have memories of. I wonder if these memories will actually be of any use.
Hey, I'll be updating this later, after we have reached the "well established" check point, and I know how to word it better. The tags will also change basses on them being needed in the story.
Cover art is on the way, but for now, just enjoy the writing, or don't, but i hope you do!
:on hiatus for world building, the co author is slow
Interesting start. Looking forward to seeing more.
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lose is the opposite of find.
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Truly, the calmest and most rational of responses
Yes, yes it does
The first thing that came to mind when I read Glitter was: GLITTER BOMB, I don't even know why
Ehh it wasn't being to helpful anyway
Nah not his wife, his daughter did
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So our hero is related to a bat? Dream-seeker or night pegasus, I wonder.
I guess having thestrals in the family line explains the excessive sensitivity to light
This is nice.
Great feel to the characters and personality of the MC
Hope you continue
Embarrassment
Of it's gonna be fun when she figures out she's standing on clouds
Yes, but your mother is an imperial (gonna want to know more about that later) which makes it very easy/possible for her genetic traits to be passed down to your children.
Also Glitter as more sensitive eyes, and probably ears as well, due to Cobolt's thestral heritage
...huh... guess the brain only downloaded the physical instincts, not the magical ones... that's gonna be a problem
Yeah, Brain really bucked up there
You have direct access to the ruler of the nation?
Hello, you condescending, sardonic fucker of a paper clip... *growls*
"I have Several questions" ... 'There's another few to add to the list.'
I laughed at this!
Getting really curious about her occupation
Heh
And I have the feeling you have/had a pretty well paying job
So protagonist is getting settled in. And annoying possessed deities. Good chapter!
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Get an upvote for using a new feature.
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Could you explain what this new feature is? It just looks like a blank comment to me.
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That was a joke about the blank comment; I've seen several people doing that lately. I'm guessing it's a site bug, so I was pointing out to the commenter that it didn't go through.
I really like the direction this is going. Making everything ever so slightly different from the show makes it so much more interesting in my opinion.
I'm really curious what might be the consequences of her interaction with nightmare moon. It's never smart to mess with a dream master, next time the nightmare might not be as easy to overcome, but then again, nightmare moon might be limited to Glitter's own fears, and being without memories certainly would make it difficult.
What exactly is the "well established" check point?
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10 chapters~!
It probably is
Sounds like a party
Rather curious about the purpose of the timeskip. What from the first four chapters will become important later, that had to be shown in infancy, before the rest of the story?
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We kinda flip back and forth a bit.
I don't actually know why, it was just fun to write!
Pink pegasus stillborn activated with a soul transplant? This will be fun...
Interesting that her introspection takes the form of a psuedo personal assistant AI.
Nobody finds her reactions strange yet, perhaps the glow of relief has yet to wear off...
Heh. Was wondering when she'd realize what everything was made of.
The assistant has been traded for a snarky Jedi, just peachy...
Interesting, they don't have Cutie marks.!
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They don't? Huh, crap, forgot to put those in, I'll get on that soon.
Interesting way to hide her foreknowledge. Pinkie is playing along...
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It was just never noticed by the main character.
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Oh, then it might have been intentional, couldn't really say at this point, I wrote this month's ago.
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On that last part of your comment, yes she has direct access to the ruler of the nation, everypony does, its just she will have to wait in a line
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Then git to writing will ya?!
I know, I know, I'm not that selfish. Just picked this and Nightmare stories and I like them both. Hope you'll get back to them eventually.
You have replaced RD with OC, haven't you? At the start of this chapter I actually thought she'll replace Rarity and Pinkie or AJ end up secretly unicorn to keep the balance, but this may work even better.
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Nah, all mane six are still here, this is just pre cannon.
Unfortunetly, this story gas not stood the test of time with me.
I'm okay with the "past" chapters, but ill probably be rewriting the "present" chapters.
My co author is finnaly getting close to finishing retooling his OC, so this story might start moving forward!
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I just expected Dash to be there since she moved in not much later after Fluttershy in the show as I could recall and they were close friends while they lived in Cloudsdale. So, it surprised me that she wasn't mentioned in "present" chapter at all. You published only one, so it were too early for such guesses.
To be honest I'm more interested in "Time & a half" since I always liked HiE which end up as Nightmare Moon. Shame majority of them are short while long are on hiatus for years. So, I hope you get back to it first. XD
BTW, replace "didn't loose all of my" with "haven't lost all my" in the description when you get back to this story.
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Time and a Half is being worked on, the main problem is that I just got a job, and I'm only now finding out how little time that leaves me with to write and draw, do enjoyable things like that.
It's above 3k now, and I'm just letting my muse take the chapter as far as it will before editing and posting.
This is very interesting! I look forward to seeing the world you build.
As an odd little aside, "Noctís" is the name I use in my AU to refer to Sombra's tribe, omnivorous unicorns with a slightly curved horn. I never thought about a downturned horn, but it really suits Rarity! As does the unicorn greeting. Formal, yet adorable!
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Eheh, we've also got Sombra's tribe in here! My co author is using that for their main character, and their kinda uncharted of writing half of the twelve tribes info, so I'll be sure to point them out, as soon as the story it up!
On a side note, this chapter, along with other the two unlisted adult chapters, make me gag, so I'll be overhauling them.
They'll come up when this stories cover art, so, yeah.
oh hell, because the cloudwalking instinct wasn't ingrained in her mind she'll be able to enable/disable it once she learns how to do so... Possibly even control it so she can sink part-way into the clouds.
Which now makes me think of Sheldon from Big Bang Theory when he was in the ball pit swimming around and popping up at random. Except this time it'd be a cute little filly swimming through clouds and popping up at random lmao
Holy hell, eighteen year timeskip...
That kinda killed my enthusiasm for this story.
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Ah, alright... Well, guess I'll just wait for more chapters then
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I thank you greatly for thus inspiriation
This is a very fun start for a story. I am definitely going to read this.
I would definitely like this story to keep going!!