• Member Since 10th May, 2023
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Cryogenii


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A tale about a young Applejack who witnesses an unknown pegasus clearing the clouds. Mesmerized by the mare's grace and athleticism, Applejack can't help but feel unfamiliar sensations of yearning.

As Rainbow Dash clears the storm clouds, she spots an unknown farm pony working below. Drawn to the mare's strong figure and blond mane, Rainbow Dash feels a pull in her heart that she's never felt before.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 8 )

Okay, I loved this, and I am sincerely looking forward to the next chapter

11583619
Thank you! Writing my first story was a little weird feeling.
To be honest I hadn't thought any further. I do have another story to get out of my head though, with a complety different direction.

11583619
Two more chapters. Hopefully they won't disappoint.

a bell tickling

i have questions . .

one of them being if there will be more chapters.
but mainly about the bell tickling . .

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You know, like they have on shop doors to make it obvious a customer has come in.

11613534
And how does that work?
Do the bells tickle them?
Or do the bells get tickled?

11613536
Ah... autocorrect strikes again!

Finally, actual good stories. i cant wait to see what is in store for the rest of the story.

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