• Published 1st May 2024
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Frazzle Dazzle - AlwaysDressesInStyle



Never upset the Balance of Nature or the Frazzits will mix things up.

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Villain

Witchweed. Witchweed, witchweed, witchweed! It’s all you can think of. The power of the potion that you don’t even know how to make. But Katrina does, and if she doesn’t remember, her former minion Rep and the Bushwoolies do.

It’s time for the world to bow before you. You confront Katrina. “Tell me how to make the potion!”

She shakes her head, claiming ignorance. You toss her aside, storming out of the Mystificent Forest and heading for Ponyland. Rep will give you the information, one way or another. You hope he picks the hard way. That’s more fun…

Comments ( 2 )

11892878

I am seriously tempted to have a go at writing along these lines myself. You won't be mad will you? Like an alt version?

I wholeheartedly endorse having a go with this yourself. Length would've helped this story tremendously; especially more background on the setting. Unfortunately, there were word limits to deal with. That's why I put the details in the blog - what episodes to check out to really get what's going on here.

Inverting the personalities would make more sense, since the Dell Dwellers just went bonkers (chaos being the opposite of order).

11893523
thanks! definitely putting that down in a storie idea blog!

aah, I didn't realise about the blog :P will check that first when I come across these in future

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