We follow a girl who live in a small town in Liverpool, fulfilling her dreams of playing football at the highest level until⦠Her path took a strange turn as she magically appeared at the magical lands of Equestria.
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Seems solid, Can't wait for more
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Liverpool vs Evertonπ₯
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So I don't know if this is out of nowhere but what happened to her brother?
Imma be honest with you, I've got zero knowledge about football or soccer whatever you wanna call it. One thing I do know however is that this chapter was written really well so you better believe I'm gonna keep sticking around
Pretty cool to have a choose your own adventure deal, but if both choices don't end up in kinda similar ways the whole story could start to loose some of its coherencey.
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Thank you!!!
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Don't worry, I'll be careful!
Neat little peak into the future. Or is it the past? I'm assuming the green mare is the heroine but it's been a while since I read so I could be wrong.
Kiddo? I belive is what you meant.
Anywho looks like I definitely miss-remembered who the protag was. I agree with my previous comment, it still seems solid.
The sudden jump from describing a war torn world to soccer (or football) is kinda confusing but it could work to the stories benefit.
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Kidda=Kiddo, just a different way we say it over in Liverpool. Also, the prologue will make sense as soon as you read chapter 11!
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I think a different place and perhaps also time.
I approve your story. Hopefully there will be a conclusion to her victory.
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Thanks! What victory do you mean?
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I meant her winning in football.
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Amelia hasn't won anything yet, BUT! She will get there and hopefully join the team she wants.