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Instead of going to another boring party and pretending to be a prim and fancy, Flurry decided to babysit her little cousin.

(A story to a friend involving his OC and Flurry Heart)

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“It’s no problem, Flurry Heart,” The girl's Aunt Twili, or Princess Twilight Sparkle as the rest of Equestria knew the purple alicorn, said as she smiled down at her niece. “Just be careful with him. Gleam might insist that he’s ready to do something but he’s still just a . ..filly......” She sighed, looking at the ceiling and shaking her head, clearly having gone through a few excursions of her own.

Filly = female horse too young to be called a mare.
You mean either "foal" (gender neutral) or "colt".

This is repeated just about every paragraph that mentions Gleam.

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Huh didn't know that. Thanks for pointing that out I'll have to fix it

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I did fix that mistake, again thanks for pointing it out ^^

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