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1 Month has past since Twilight became ruler of Equestria but after two weeks of her reign. The secret of how the Legion of Doom form came out and Twilight is having some problems in handling the rage of not only other creatures but her ponies as well.

(Warning, Story Contents: Misdirection, Corruption, & Harsh Truths)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )
Comment posted by GamePlayer64 deleted March 1st

I find it very hard to believe that Bones is the "Villain" in this story?

Where your stories direction clearly shows that the three other pony tribes are the REAL monsters and racist assholes that they are.

And to be fair, those idiotic guards and Discord did destroyed his own damn house and bother him, so that's their fault.

Wonder how his wife would feel about that?

Wouldn’t it be 6th or maybe 7th tribe? Earth, Peagsus, Unicorn, Crystal, Alicorn, and Thestral.

Fun fact: Unicorns are described in some versions of The Bible... as having two horns.

Whoever came u with that, you had ONE job! :facehoof:

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To my knowledge they're basically describing rhinos.

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And Bicorns are man eaters for eating faithful husbands.

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The Ponies with bat wings instead of feathered wings.

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Fair point and Luna has some as her bodyguards.

“Can a hero be a bad guy… That would make a cool comic.” He said Spike wanted to protest, but he paused. It will sound like an impressive comic to read if it exists.

It's a good concept. Until it's been overused to death.

Like with DC Comic's Earth-3's Crime Syndicate. Or Erath-10's Nazi versions.

Or Injustice with Superman and Wonder Woman, or Batman's "Dark Night's: Metal" Dark Multiverse Counterparts like the Batman-Who-Laughs.


I don't personally hate the characters nor the concept. It's just that fans are eventually starting to get tired of this.

“Ah… the one who nearly got Equestria destroyed.” Said Mass “Surprised that he wasn’t turned to stone with your villains. What did he say to escape that fate?” Celestia and Luna looked away in shame since it was Discord who gave them the idea which got them to avoid his punishment. Poison pulled out a mini baster, collected 8oz and released a small drop in his mouth. They watched as they waited, even the doctors as Discord glowed a bright green and all his bandages and cast came off as he was instantly healed.

“I’M BACK!!!”

“No, you’re not.” Said Mass as he turned to see her as he screamed.

“It’s the Ram Pony! He’s turned himself into a hideous mare!” He screamed which caused Mass’ eyes to turn black.

“Tell me where the Canterlot Morgue is, SO I CAN SEND HIM THERE MYSELF!” Roared Mass as Fluttershy flew to Discord.

“Discord… this is Mass, and this is Poison. Friends of the one who hurt you after you dumped a bucket of ice water on him.” She said which Discord looked at them.

“The Lord of Chaos who was stupid to say his name backwards.” Said Poison “Try to snap it all away.” Discord snapped his fingers, and nothing happened

“What a fool.” Said Mass as she helped Poison to aid the other patients.

“Ugh… it's like losing my magic again…” He whined.

“Get used to it.” Said Poison “You should never believe that you can get away with your crimes.” She said as she healed another victim as Discord pouted as Mass was measuring him.

“What are you doing?” He asked.

“Learning your measurements for your coffin or you prefer to be cremated?” She said as Discord gulped.

“Have I mentioned that you have lovely eyes?” He said.

“Keep talking or prepare to be mounted or stuffed.” Said Mass as Discord coward to her.

Discord should be punished

Name: Bomb Bomb

Gender: *Male*

Age: Kid

Race: Bicorn

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He still can't use his Chaos Magic for a month. Just because he foolishly said his name backwards.

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