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When Discord escapes and the elements of harmony are no use against him anymore Princess Celestia with help of her sister Princess Luna use a spell to go to an Alterate Universe to bring forth two heroes to help save Equestria. Can these two heroes defeat Discord once and for all? Or will Discord finally win and take over all of Equestria?
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Deleting comments, are we? How childish.
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If you ever want to get better, learn to take criticism.
well i only take out bad comments off because this is my first story so i want people to go easy on me ok
childish? HA whatever
ELEMENTS OF HARMONY! ASSEMBLE!
ALSO DERPY!
You don't include the 'said [charictor]' inside the speech marks. You write like "Hmm said Sonic, I wonder what she's doing out there?" when it should be "Hmm," said Sonic, "I wonder what she's doing out there?".
2099908 The thing is, I wrote a comment on how you could improve, and you removed it. You NEED to listen to people who are trying to help you improve, because the more you do, the less bad comments you will get and the better at writing you will become. When people write comments telling you about the bad things, you can't just delete them and continue repeating your mistake.
2101602 Ok thanks
Hey not bad for a first story all you need to do is fix a few mistakes and quite rushing through it and slow it down a litte bite. Other than that it's not a bad first story.
2106843 Thanks and don't worry my next stories I will try not to rush through them or make any mistakes.
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Ok rodent read but going to tonight but looks good
the story is alright
2123073 thanks man
2439128 ok sure
cant wait for you to start the second story in this series
2760614 don't worry I will get to it after I get done with my second story a dream come true ok so don't worry
nice
mmmmmmm
sonic and shadow badass mode activated
Best story I've ever read. You did a finominal job. Looking forward to the next chapter of your second story.
Problem. Isn't Shadow an antagonist?
4797694 in some moments yes. but otherwise he will help when needed or when he wants to. he's weird like that
Pretty good story
Oh wow, you delete comments because your an 5 year old and cant handle the gayness of this story woooooooooooooow REAAAAAL GOOD
Well i saw you missed a few " " " and everything is rushed it seems. I only overread a bit, but it was a bit weird. I think you should rewrite it and maybe make it longer too.
I don´t think i need to read the whole thing this time to say that it isn´t perfect, but i don´t say it is bad either, because i didn´t read all of it.
However i can see that it isn´t perfect already and to short i think, at least to short for a proper romance.
5355170 you're, can't...
Nice job. The next chapter will be up soon.
6309353 alright cool and on Monday I will be starting putting chapter 3 on youtube
Keep up the good work!
I think you mean "alright".
Good premise though.
6418627 don't worry my helper is re making the chapter for me and hopefully soon i will be remaking that chapter along with the last chapter
Hey! Key Stix and I did a riff on this story for Discord's Funtastic Theater 3000. If you don't know what riffing is, it's MST3K, but with fanfics. Thanks to Will Atkinson for letting us riff this story. I hope you like it.
Chapter 1 - Chapter 2 - Chapter 3 - Chapter 4 - Chapter 5
Isn't sonic invincible while super so why did dash have to get hurt and how did discord 86 or whatever the term is dark super sonic
7347965 I did like it and can you rift the next two stories of my Sonic and Shadow in Equestria series? Please
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Discord in his dragon form is more powerful then super Sonic so he could've killed him