Spike is forced to confront the truth about his crush for Rarity.
Short, sweet, simple.
Requested by Statoose.
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"Dear Princess Celestia: WHAT!?!?!" I laughed. Cute story Dawn.
And it was truly a sweet way of Rarity confessing her feelings.
I liked it!
Ending made it for me!
FINALLY! I've been waiting for another good Sparity fic for a while. Happy ending and the letters were a nice touch.
Here were my reactions:
Twilight reading story: yep I see a parallel
End of Rarity's story: Dawwwwwwww
The last few lines:
Wait, is Spike grown up? Cute story though.
Hah, I'm grinning ear to ear now. A wonderful and succinct story.
And I loved the ending, as I'm sure everyone else will
The ending is funny
So. Awesome. Must. Write. At least. One MORE. CHAPTER!
Seriously, this is the best RarityXSpike fic I've read, and I don't even like the couple that much.
What a heart warming story
I seriously loved the ending part it was sooo perfectly written(so was the rest of the story) but i mean like that letter to Twilight and Twilight's reaction was just PRICELESS
Good to see it here too.
Nice story, finally Spikey-Wikey got who he deserved. Also... your ending was priceless
What the knight looked like: fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/008/0/a/no_pony_makes_friends_like_gaston_by_atomic_chinchilla-d4lov1j.png
Oh, that was a beautiful story :)
I am grinning so much it literally hurts. Ow.
*hearty applause*
Touching, with just the right stinger of hilarity. A nice blend of positive emotions.
That was a sweet story, and the ending was just priceless!
163299
No lie, greatest post ever.
Most awesome. I loved Twilight's reaction at the end.
163299 Every last inch of him is covered in hair.
I will admit, I'm not a spike fan, but yet for some reason I find myself looking for more of this paring lately, and am sorely disappointed in the *ahem* -Rarity- of the aforementioned...
that was sweet, and that ending was just to Perfect!
At first I was like... http://mlfw.info/f/710/
But then I read the last two lines and now I'm like http://mlfw.info/f/129/
DAT ENDING
"When is love ever a given?" Very good line.
wow is it said that i get the way spike feels?
163299 ... lol. i would be scared too if somepony like that put there hoof around me
Very sweet all the way through... and that ending totally made it!
That was exactly what I've come to expect of you, DawnFade. Short and charmingly sweet. Thanks again, for taking my request :)
And the ending was absolutely pure win.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked the result :)
I don't know what inspired you to put that little ending in there but after reading all that heartfelt emotion that ending made me bust a gut laughing. Congrats!
Nice little story there. And I just loved the ending,
Doing great until the end there buddy... Then you were incredible!
Nice, cute little story you wrote there. I was going to give you a 4.5, but that end alone deserves a 5.
163299
That, sir, won some giggles from me.
oh. That ending. Cute story!
Beautiful!
oh god that ending had me in stitches!!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HILARIOUS!!!!!!!
as for Rarity and Spike:
I shall leave my mark on this story, and just tell you; this was awesome
-Glassed
Dawww! This story was great!
The ending was amazing!!!!
5/5
Awesome story! :D And that ending XD
that was an really good story with the best ending EVA
That was the most absurdly wonderful thing we've read all week!
Rarity x Spike. Good.
This is adorable! I'm not huge on the Sparity pairing, but Spike is my favorite character. You did a good job making him the melodramatic teen xD. It seemed a bit rushed though.
This is adorable! I'm not huge on the Sparity pairing, but Spike is my favorite character. You did a good job making him the melodramatic teen xD. It seemed a bit rushed though.
And with that mix of words, you brushed away all the stress I was feeling about the biology essay I've been putting off for the last couple weeks. But I really need to get back to it now.
Dammit. Stressed again.
Its completed and has no chapter 2