Redoing the whole thing · 12:55pm May 24th, 2012
So, after posting two chapters of my fic and having done some more work after that, I discovered just how badly written the first chapter was and the second one wasn't much to cheer for either.
I have therefore decided to re-write the whole thing. For those who have already read it and liked it, don’t worry, the story is just the same and all I have done is to try making it more readable in terms of grammatical, dialog and how the characters are portrayed.
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