Pet Peeve #001 - On the matter of humming. · 5:51am Jul 8th, 2019
This might not be worthy of a blog. Okay, well, it might be. I just wanted everyone to know my displeasure with a certain... thing I've seen cropping up in people's writing.
Jason hummed. "Well, I guess things couldn't possibly get any worse."
Or,
"Hmm, well, I guess things couldn't possibly get any worse," Jason said.
Which one of those two sentences do you think flows better?